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Cimatu


Cimatu
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Copyright: Raul Boncan Jr (voyagenation) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 66 W: 30 N: 189] (2100)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-06-13
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D70, 18-70mm AF-S DX f/3
Exposure: f/4.5, 1/125 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-24 6:21
Viewed: 503
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
My 4 yr. old daughters horse Cimatu, braving the cold rains in Mt. Cabuyao, Baguio City.
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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2006-07-24 7:54]
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Welcome to TL Raul. I hope you are enjoying it here.

Your photo has a nice somber mood to it which is what i liek about it. It is also the moof that made me open the thumbnail to have a closer look at it. You write in your note that it is a photo of your dauthers horse. Unfortenatly the two poles in the foreground distracts the vewer from noticing the horse. I think, if you had goen a litle bit closer you woudl have been able to give the virer a better view of the horse. As i mention at the begining, i really like the mood of the photo, a loeny horse in a wild landscape having to fight natures ways. Your choce of colours add a good deal to this mood.

Using the wide angle and making the horse closer to the lens will create a dramatic visual power, try it, cheers.

Jeffrey

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