Len I

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• dustein (1773)
• [2007-05-09 0:26]
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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-05-09 0:49]

hi Francis
very good picture of Len. its very sharp in her beautiful eyes and the picture has a great soft atmosphere. i like the dark tones
well framed to.
tfs
M

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• graemann (5146)
• [2007-05-09 1:00]
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Bro:

Sensya ka nd dito ha.. Sorry in advance. hehe...

Eto lang mga comments ko. At di ako exert sa glamour. Pero lam ko glamour ang gusto mong concept dito.

I think this post doesn't suit her. It makes the face bloated pati yung tummy nya. A sitting down or upright position might be better.
The lighting can be improved.
Check mo tama ng ilaw sa face nya. Parang may kulang. Hair have lost the detail. Seems like you use ambient lighting? Or kung me ilaw ka di halata.

Her facial expression can improved din. More emotion siguro or seductive? =) Pero di ko alam ang concept mo dito.

Yan na muna.

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• Shogun (10391)
• [2007-05-09 1:24]
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Nice Francis! galing ng eye contact bro. wla ako alam sa glamour
like Eman pero sakin okay na toh. medyo sumobra lang puti ng
muka, but its just me bro. ang ganda model mo! hehehe.
upload ka pa pic nya ha. lol! Tfs

Oggie

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• Muscovado (491)
• [2007-05-09 3:10]

Hi Francis,
Ganda nya!, la ko alam sa tech aspect nito, all i can say is, overdressed sya as a seducer but nabawi sa mata. TFS
Czaldy

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• jovienaval (2302)
• [2007-05-09 10:30]

was i dreaming? ;-)
glamorous comeback for this bro!

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• peetol (5743)
• [2007-05-11 6:30]
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Nice one, Francis. Aba, ba't hindi mo kami sinama? LOL! Great concept and shot for me. Pero sa sunod be concious of cropping out the foot (same goes with the hands). Medyo awkward yung pose at saka drab yung mga colors, pero ok lang kasi may next time pa naman na kasama kami. LOL!

TFS bro!