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Copyright: OgGie Duque (Shogun) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 831 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10-22
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/2.6, 1/50 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-01 9:45
Viewed: 727
Points: 68
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is influenced by BK's shot (wenging), but took it from a
different angle.
Took this shot in the afternoon. Got this angle to capture
the bright parts on the handlebars. these are sunlight
coming from the window.
Thanks for Looking! Ciao!

Shutter Speed 1/50
Aperture f/2.6
Adjust sharpness, cropped, framed.

Shogun

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Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To Ratna: Excellent perspective shot.Shogun 1 11-16 07:08
To mrcrow: shiny and slick.Shogun 1 11-14 11:21
To Juliet: Well done on thisShogun 1 11-09 22:43
To Eden: excellent pov,Shogun 1 11-09 11:44
To John_F_Kennedy: Wonderful image,Shogun 1 11-08 22:20
To SylFondacci: Nice metro shot,Shogun 1 11-07 22:00
To allanbarredo: Bawal pic sa LRTShogun 1 11-06 22:51
To modalus: this is wonderfulShogun 1 11-05 07:44
To erdna: Is this train in Manila?Shogun 1 11-05 07:17
To shahzzam: Awesome shot OgGie!Shogun 1 11-03 20:46
To chrisJ: Superb sharpnessShogun 1 11-03 20:45
To cezar62: excellent compositionShogun 1 11-03 20:44
To inaam: Candid scene is presentedShogun 1 11-03 20:42
To aysm: CommutersShogun 1 11-02 21:38
To rewshearer: CommmutersShogun 5 11-02 11:39
To fadge14: CommutersShogun 1 11-02 03:03
To hydroxycut: lrtShogun 1 11-02 02:29
To u2y: BawalShogun 1 11-02 01:05
To FAHM: great progress and improvement in your workShogun 1 11-01 21:31
To PierreFrigon: Seems like the people all turned their heaShogun 1 11-01 12:22
To perryhooter: CommutersShogun 1 11-01 11:48
To shelbeesmom: :)Shogun 1 11-01 11:05
To csuebele: CiaoShogun 1 11-01 10:31
To kayra: ThanksShogun 1 11-01 10:29
To wishnugaruda: :)Shogun 1 11-01 10:28
To wenqing: hi BKShogun 1 11-01 10:26
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Critiques [Translate]

i like subway photos :) this is a subway rite al? :)
it looks very much like what we hav here, clean and quite roomy :)
excellent composition showing the depth and patterns
well done :)

This is good like BK's shot. Nicely composed.

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  • kayra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 381 W: 37 N: 112] (3121)
  • [2006-11-01 10:21]
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Hi Oggie,
Excellent composition, perspective, colours, sharpness and light :) Very well done.

Hulya

Hi Shogun,
I also saw BK's shot - and I like both.
yours is different, more from the side and not so low - but also beautiful.
I like the perspective - it seems the train will never end, that's wonderful, thanks
Sabine - wishnugaruda

HA! At first i thought this was Xu's pic! I had to look below to see it was YOU! Nice shot, different angle and pov, but nice and clear!
B-)
Linda

Hmm ... unless I'm wrong, this is the SRT? The LRT and MRT are never this empty (at least not in my experience.)
I think the shot would benefit a little from a slight anticlockwise rotation - but an interesting scene, sharp and well captured!
Rew

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  • FAHM Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor [C: 37 W: 56 N: 1] (4)
  • [2006-11-01 16:42]
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Hello OgGie, I also thougt it was one of wenging's photo's !!! but I saw your name below it and I new right away that you got the inspiration from his photo's. I agree with Rew that it could use some straightning to the left. otherwise it looks great

There is great progress and improvement in your work shogun. Keep it going !!! TFS, Francois

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  • u2y Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 4 N: 42] (1172)
  • [2006-11-02 0:35]
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hoy, bawal yan! hahaha... i always wanted to take this shot in lrt2 but its prohibited... well done!

francis

Excellent work bro! pero parang hindi sa LRT/MRT yan ah? hindi ko pa nakikitang ganyan ang LRT/MRT.

Nice colors & POV.I have been away from manila for sometime now. I would like to try this on my next vacation. Keep it coming kabayan.

eric

Wonderful. Seems like the people all turned their heads while you where taking the picture. Nobody is looking at you.
Well done.
Pierre
:) later

Hello OgGie !

Seems to be an endless train!

Well, you choose the optimum POV to capture the best light and perspective! Well done !
Robert

Excellent compo, POV, DOF and colours. I like the silver colour of the train and the colour spots of the clothes. Very good.

Andreea

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer [C: 3409 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-11-02 13:21]

Nice picture, good work on it.
Jan

Ha ha! They turned away from your camera! Good shot.
tfs
Regards/AY

Hi OgGie,
Very beautiful daily life shot.Excellent perspective and compo.Best regards.

hAyAti

Hi Oggie, very well taken and I thought I recognised a bit the style of BK :)
Well composed, good control of light.

Your train is so spacious compared to ours.

Well seen and done, Yan :)

ps: thx so much for your visit in "Pasture".

Hi OgGie

Superb sharpness & well managed interior lighting with excellent colour. I like the tight framing & perspective. Tfs!

Awesome shot OgGie! You got everyone here, and no one sees you, wow! Great job, TFS, Sam

Funny and nice! It could be a photo of our friend *wenqing* Good clear camera work Shogun! Welldone
John T

** later

Hi Oggie!
Very good shot,excellent composition and atmosphere of train.
Regards.TFS.
Cezar

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 5 N: 389] (1376)
  • [2006-11-03 15:45]
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The picture has been taken in good details. Candid scene is presented here in which daily life is well depicted. An interesting point of of view has been choosen.

Thanks for sharing it.

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  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 508 W: 0 N: 18] (5420)
  • [2006-11-04 8:22]

Hi Oggie
Nice daily life shot. Great POV and DOF. Good colours, sharpnes and details.
Well done

osse

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 630 W: 68 N: 747] (5425)
  • [2006-11-04 17:32]
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Wowwoweeeee, this is an endless train! The photo is sharp, clear and clean just like the train. Very well done. Is this train in Manila?

Andre'

i really like all the chrome everywhere. this is wonderful. I like wengings interpretation too but this is superb.
s.

pl (ran out)

Nice! Eto pala yung sinasabi nyo. Very nice composition! (Bawal pic sa LRT a :D )

Nice metro shot, very different of French one, so crowded ... the perspective is perfect, maybe too much of ceiling and not enough of ground but it would maybe too centered in that case.
Sylvie

Just a great shot
Top Classe
RuudBlok

Wonderful image, with great expressions and fantastic lights!
Achim

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  • Eden Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 50 N: 86] (2084)
  • [2006-11-09 11:20]
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excellent pov, sharpness and superb depth. its funny how a train full of people just sit there staring at nothing. The only thing i can see here is that the light on the roof is a bit distracting. I personally would have cloned it out because that area leads the eye to the end of the train and the light breaks that visual transation.
TFS
martha

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  • Juliet Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 879 W: 64 N: 1979] (13626)
  • [2006-11-09 12:55]
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Hi Shogun,
Love the DOF on this. You caught the lighting superbly. Well done on this. Julie

hey broder, this is a nicely composed sneak shot!! :) the sharpness is really there and the vanishing point is worth mentioning! good work... Ron

shiny and slick...good lifestyle feel to this with all the people just getting on with things and not posing
very clean transport and sharp as a pin
good pov as well not to attract attention
cheers
geof

Hi Shogun,
A most skillful capture!
Time of day well picked, with just the right amount of passengers...
Good point of view gives a fine perspective, colours and details are impressive!
Greetings,
Pablo -

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  • Ratna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 221 W: 68 N: 204] (1231)
  • [2006-11-15 20:10]
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Hi Al
Excellent perspective shot. love the angle that you include the reflections on the ceiling. great Sharpness. TFS.
Ratna

Hi OgGie,
This is fantastic!
Great DoF and sharpness, colour is awesome.
A top shot!
Thanks,
b.

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