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Longing!
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Copyright: Pierre Lawrence Ong Ante (peetol) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 589 W: 66 N: 698] (5743)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-15
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-21 19:04
Viewed: 698
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Still on the same photoshoot as my previous posts, we transferred outside the house for an outdoor location. The sun was fading fast but we were still able to capture some light. We did not use any artificial lighting for this shot because we left our strobes on the 2nd floor of the house and feared that we might get no more light from the sun if we have to set it up first.

Here, Nadine just made her own poses while Raul (Voyagenation) and I clicked away. I positioned myself to be able to include the lines drawing away from her.

Comments and critiques are most welcome! Thank you! :)

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In PP: I did some level changes, healed some blemishes, and sharpened the image.
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Ganda ng POV dre, pero nawala lighting mo sa :D mukhang nasa kabila ang ilaw paharapin mo siya sa kabila :D

Well I love it! Very dramatic pose and composition and a strong expression from your model. The converging lines work well. This shot would have looked good in b&w too.
If anything, I would suggest cloning out the hair across her shoulder, it's quite distracting - but it's a greaet shot!
Rew

Wow panay ang portraits ha! To face the model a little to the left would have been better to capture some more lights IMHO. But i like the vanishing lines b/g. Keep it up. TFS

eric

Hi Pierre, I like everything about this except that the right side of the model seems too shadowed. Maybe considering a bit of additional light or force-flashing might have helped, only because her pretty eyes are so shadowed it's hard to see them.

hello Pierre!beauty shot!the composition is wonderful! I like the lines on the background!
Thanks for sharing this photo!
Best regards Aga

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  • aysm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 86 W: 0 N: 41] (493)
  • [2006-11-22 7:41]
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Hi my dear friend, you have done it and you deserve the mark.

Thanks for sharing.

Regards.
AY

nice position to include the lines Pierre.
if looks could kill! hehe. Tfs

Shogun

Hi Peet!

You got this frame really well and got the horizontal lines work
for you. Kudos!

I would suggest more lines included... I mean to show great DOF. But its a minor thing.


TFS.

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2008-11-01 10:51]

Great portrait. First rate use of external elements. Using aailable spots on the locale is the thing to do.

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