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Vogue!
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Copyright: Pierre Lawrence Ong Ante (peetol) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 589 W: 66 N: 698] (5743)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-11-15
Categories: Portrait
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-11-22 18:47
Viewed: 634
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In the same photoshoot as my previous post, I took this image on the 2nd floor of the beautiful house where we had the session. I wanted more light from the window, but the sun was already blocked by the adjacent houses.

I used just one main fill light with a diffuser situated to the left and bounced off the ceiling. I extended the stand as high up as possible so that I was able to eliminate the reflection of the flash on the glass at the back.

Model: Bea
PP: Lens blur filter, levels adjustment, cropped and resized.

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  • shal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 165 W: 46 N: 161] (1304)
  • [2006-11-22 19:03]
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Lovely reds against the greens,
good pose and framing :)
Cheers :D

a sooo elegant pose Peet!
i love the composition, if I may just a little over
on saturation but knowing your monitor's temperament
you are absolved.

raul

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  • Konie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 29 N: 298] (3006)
  • [2006-11-22 19:29]
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Nice photo Pierre. The colors are so vibrant. Like Raul said, the pose is elegant which goes with the nice facial features of Bea. The only comment I have is on the level adjustment. It must have gone too much on the darker side that the skin tone of the model has been affected. Overall, though, I find the photo good. TFS.

Konie

bro! panalo sa pose! the expression of the model is perfect...but once agin the lighting...:D hiramin mo kase kay Raul yung lights :D hehehehe nagsosolo ka eh :D

Wow, your shots are getting better and better! The light here is good, the pose is good too (and that dress - wow!) Saturation is very nice.
I wonder about the composition, maybe there's too much space above her head - but it really doesn't bother me, I like this portrait a lot.
Rew

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  • Ilir Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 549 W: 69 N: 53] (5119)
  • [2006-11-22 20:11]
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I also have some issues with the crop and space, but nevertheless the intensity of colors and her pose are really remarkable. Well done!

A.

Wow, Nice Christmas colors pre! Daw maaga ang pasko sa imo ba! I like:
- colors, very good
- her pose, there is something about the way she looks at you, as if saying "Dali di..." lol
- DOF and details

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3322 W: 789 N: 4436] (19970)
  • [2006-11-22 22:35]
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Hi Pierre,
You composed a portrait with fabulous colors. What a beautiful contrast with green and red, very intensive colors very good mix with the golden skin of your model. Congratulations! Annie

Posing & subject is really good. Colors are great but i feel its a little bit saturated esp. the skin tones. You missed out to select some on the arms & shoulder part for your lens blur.Better if u use a 2.8f to have the natural blur & depth. Ur photos are gettting better.

eric

btw. merry christmas ;p

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  • Eru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 235 W: 4 N: 83] (2760)
  • [2006-11-22 23:52]
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Hello Pierre,

Super colors! I love your compo too and the position of bea, with a certain "nonchalance".
Bravo!

Marc.

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  • aysm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 86 W: 0 N: 41] (493)
  • [2006-11-23 4:00]
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Wow!.....I don't think I could produse such pic.

Thanks for sharing.

Regards.
AY.

Hi Pierre,
Wonderful colors and compo, bravo.
LOOOOvely women too!

Steph.

I re-upload pictures very soon.

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  • kayra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 381 W: 37 N: 112] (3121)
  • [2006-11-23 5:26]
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Hi Pierre,
Excellent composition and colours. Wonderful model :)
Congratulations Pierre..

Hulya

hello Pierre! once again exellent shot with beauty model!wonderful pose and shadow on coach!
Thanks for sharing!
Best regards Aga

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  • metem Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1307 W: 39 N: 238] (2104)
  • [2006-11-23 7:21]
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Hi, Pierre , good pose and very good photo

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 831 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2006-11-23 11:17]
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nice pose and excellent colors Pierre. nice shot with the window behind Bea. Ganda talaga ni Bea. ;) Tfs

Shogun

A nice photo Pierre. Lovely, elegant and well framed. The rich colours look good. May be a little too dark on the models face. I would like to see her eyes more. That's just my humble opinion though. I would just love to have the opportunity to do what you are doing.
Regards, Kath

HOLA PIERRE, LINDA MODELO BIEN LOGRADOS LOS COLORES FELICIDADES

hi bro peet,

kulay paskong-pasko na yan at iba talaga ang dating nyang si bea at celebs talaga na pinaghalong.... rio diaz at cindy kurleto ang appeal.

aba at iba ba talaga ang kuha pag nasa second floor....hmmm! lemee guess. ;-)

tagumpay ka kapatid!
jovs ;-)

I would suggest a fill light to have add more detail in the shadows. I love to see those eyes.

TFS

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  • ub06 Silver Star Critiquer [C: 38 W: 0 N: 6] (202)
  • [2006-12-01 1:08]
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NICE COLOUR CONTRS I THINK U USE IN THIS LOCATION U SHOULD USE BOUNCE FLASH

Hi Pierre

La composición de colores me encanta y expresión buen trabajo

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