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For my Dad and my Sister


For my Dad and my Sister
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Copyright: Angelo Dulay (anjhello) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 983 W: 54 N: 291] (4670)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-30
Categories: Daily Life, Nature
Exposure: f/8, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): 150 points or more!!!, (",), maquereau [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-07-10 2:23
Viewed: 5152
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 184
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I'd like to dedicate this to my dad and my sister who passed away. Today is the death anniversary of my sister and on the 14th my dad's death anniversary.

I miss them...
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Hello my friend.

This is a beautiful capture and I am sure a lovely thought to your lost ones. I lost my grandfather and my daughter within a few weeks of each other in 2000. The oldest and youngest member of the family. I miss them dearly and can fully understand your feelings. I like to think they are somewhere together caring for each other. Photography is a nice way to stay in touch and rememeber them by.

TFS regards Helen

Hi Angelo,
How sad you must feel, but I hope you have fond memories of them both to keep in your heart.
.
This one is as good as the last one - both really splendid and those colours brighten up my day, hope it works for you too.
Thanks
Els

Very nice tribute to your father and sister, Angelo. I know what you feel.
Very nice compo and colours.

Best regards and strenght,

Don

hi Angelo..
Really beautiful...

m..

Hello Angelo,

This is nice tribute for your sister and dad. Sure you'll have lot of memories from them to feel good.

Beautiful butterfly photo, nice composition, sharp and colorful. TFS

Vandana

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  • juyona Gold Star Critiquer [C: 2585 W: 1 N: 425] (10173)
  • [2007-07-10 8:05]

Hello Angelo,
A beautiful tribute,
my best desires for you...
I appreciate your sensibility, in this beautiful pic,
greetings

Hi Angero!
Very good macro photo.Nice colours.
Cheers.
Cezar

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 593 W: 3 N: 545] (3785)
  • [2007-07-10 10:42]

hello Angelo,
a wonderful dedication. This is simply beautiful. Well composed with delightful colours.
regards
Bev

Angelo, really a beautiful butterfly, great photo, details colors POV and BG really great. TFS

rintile

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  • timtim Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 935 W: 106 N: 610] (10187)
  • [2007-07-10 16:02]

Beautiful shot nice comp

Bonsoir Angelo,
WoW! this is a beautiful picture Macro Butterfly, niceled composed with great colors,nice tribute to your father and sister,,well done..Salutations
Michel

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3311 W: 1066 N: 5188] (23042)
  • [2007-07-10 21:15]

Hi Angello,
Superb macro! I like much the vivid colors. The harmony green and cyan on background is so beautiful. Fine details on butterfly and well balanced composition! Good thoughts for your sister and father! Bravo! Annie

wonderfull capture.. details are excellent.. great colors too..
average: 3 point
TFS
Marco

follows

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3204 W: 262 N: 7964] (34497)
  • [2007-07-11 3:38]

Oh Angelo, that is so sad for you. I can understand what you must feel this time of the year.
On the Anjhello Scoring System I will give you '3' - well done, super colours and details,
Janice

Hi Angelo,

I can feel how you feel. Miss them much. They left legacy to you to remember them. This picture is superb.

Regards,
Tjutjut

Angelo,
I'm sorry for your loss, life certainly has it's back sides too...
Your tribute is wonderful, butterflies are so full of life and gives hope...
Regards,
Pablo -

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  • inaam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1816 W: 39 N: 465] (4859)
  • [2007-07-11 11:45]

Dear Angelo,

Please accept my heartiest condulances and deepest feelings on the sad demise of your dad and sister. Wish you be patient my friend.

The image in view is abeautiful tribute to your loved one. An excellent presentation.

Many thanks for sharing.

Hello Angelo,
Excellent Butterfly close-up with great colors,pov,dof,focus and bg.
Sorry for your Dad and Sister :(God Rest them in Peace.
CT

Merhaba Angelo,
What a great Butterfly macro.Details, colours, light and POV are excellent.TFS.
Cheers!

hAyAti

Hi Angelo..
Magnifique ..
Great tribute with a such excellent picture, full of life and colors...
best regards
sandu

Hi dear friend,
lovely gift for your beloved ones... So sorry for the sad story... I wish you all the best in the world and may you find your happines because you really deserve it.
Beautiful photo!

Kindly regards,
Ioana

Amazing macro Angelo!
Great framing and beautiful colours!!!
Very, very well done! :)
Best,
Izabela

Hi,Angelo.
Lovely shot!Perfect focus and great DOF.
Love the composition and colours.
Just SUPERB!
TFS...
Regards,
Daniel

Nice photographic tribute to your dad and sister. I'm sorry for your loss.

Photo quality is excellent! I like the sharp flower and butterfly against the blurred background. I don't see anyway this shot could be improved. Nice work!

Best Regards,

Rob

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  • BMYNBR Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 144 W: 2 N: 129] (1409)
  • [2007-07-14 22:34]

Nice sharp shot, great comp and colors.
TFS Dave

Hai Angelo,
Very beautiful capture for your love ones,
GR, Jacqueline

Hello Angelo,

A beautiful photograph for sad memories...love never dies...TFS
Donna:o)

Hello Angelo,

Another beautiful macro!

Malik & Mary.

P.S. However, we are a very sad about this anniversary...

Hi Angelo,
A fitting dedeication. Excellent composition and framing of this beautiful butterfly. Well isolated from a nice OOF backround. Nice sharp detail. Well done!
Scott

Hi Angelo.Beautiful macro and nice colours.
Best whishes for your sister and your dad.
Regards, Bosko.

This is a truely beautiful tribute...
The colours are amazing - nice contrast between the butterfly and the pink flower, and nice harmony between the butterfly and background :)
Lovely capture

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  • Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1165 W: 2 N: 215] (16615)
  • [2007-07-16 2:00]

Beauutiful !

hello! wonderful shot1 excellent colours! great macro! TFS
greetings Aga

Hello Angelo!
Beautiful butterfly and great colours, detail and clarity in your picture!
Excellent done!
Best regards,
Lili

PS - is a nice way to stay in touch and rememeber them by.

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  • fkokol Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 218 W: 0 N: 147] (1502)
  • [2007-07-16 13:49]

Amazing shot. Wonderful colours, light and sharpness. greetings,
figen

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  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 452 W: 0 N: 18] (5420)
  • [2007-07-17 14:07]

Hi Angelo
Good colourfull close-up shot. Good composition and POV.
Well done

osse

Hi Angelo, great dedication to your dead father and sister, splendid butterfly with wonderful flower, excellent colors, very well done, ciao Silvio

Hi Angelo,
Beautiful shot.

Biswarup

Hi Angelo: A very appropriate photo for such an anniversary. A well done Photo with great focus lighting and colour the blurred background makes a big difference .....thanks ........Roman

Hello Angelo,
Awesome macro of this butterfly! Very well composed adn the exposure is perfect. Great details, awesome job!

-JD

Super colour composition
Also a fine macro with good use of the field
Razor sharp
Impressive
RuudBlok

Hallo Angelo..
verry nice capture and SUPER POV!
Regards,
ella

hi, angelo
colors, like love (the true one), will never end. we all miss someone, we all would give a part of our colors just to be together with those who are no longer here.
a fine tribute of yours these colorful tears.
regards,
cal

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1264 W: 44 N: 3160] (18766)
  • [2007-07-25 20:29]

Hi Angelo:)
Beautiful tribute for your Dad and sister, very sad occasion...
Be strong!!! I know that is not easy without love ones...
Best Wishes for you - Tom

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  • Jens Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 555 W: 53 N: 1139] (4663)
  • [2007-07-26 3:52]

Jens.
Wow, what a shot.
According to my score system, I will give you 10 out off 10. Excellent job, well done and all my compliments TFS.
jens.
I am sure that your dad and your sister will be happy for this photo.

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1077 W: 239 N: 849] (8975)
  • [2007-07-26 18:39]

Hi Angelo ,
Excellent macro with wonderful colour. Wonderfully spotted. The composition is well balanced and the colours are so rich and vibrant.
TFS
Lopa

Hi Angelo,
Stunning image! Excellent sharpness and details and wonderful colours in the butterflys wings. Very sad time for you, TFS
Cheers Tina :-)

WOW !
what i suppose to say after 94 points my friend???
just look and see and take a relax time with this i think :)

***) point

Hello Angelo,

What a beautiful picture and a fitting dedication to your dearest lost ones! My brother passed away last year and there is still a huge hole where he once was.

Lovely sharp detail, excellent composition and stunning colours.

My best wishes,
Bev :-)

Hello Angello
A superb composition. I like this dominant coloured. The image is clear the parameters of exposure are right. A very good realization. Good day.
In a friendly way
Gildas

Angelo, a simple and simply gorgeous tribute. The colors you have here complement each other very well. The detail on the butterfly is wonderful and crisp, the flower soft and tender. The line of the stem invites the eye upward to your focal area. The blue of the wings is mirroed in the richer turquoise of the background. Very excellent and fitting work.

The text is touching! I understand that... The day my dad die, i told in my head... I will feel your presence in a particular wind... And i feel that wind sometime... Free to me to remember or not. It's my way to work...
The idea of a blue Monarchs please me a lot!
Very poetic!

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  • salmi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 752 W: 5 N: 428] (4755)
  • [2007-08-04 11:05]

Hi Angelo,
I'm sorry about your lost, I know how hard is it...
Your picture is a lovely tribute for them, lovely colors, details and DOF.
Excelent done!
Mihaela

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 6136 W: 175 N: 1933] (7528)
  • [2007-08-05 14:12]

Hi Angelo,

Beautiful tribute for the two, I am sure that came from heart these words and they are very happy with that, his theme is synonymous of - Freedom - and to go where they are all of the beautiful and colored things.
Very nice tribute to your father and sister, Angelo.

Sérgio

Hi Angelo :)

I'm sorry about your lost. I wish you the best in your future, Your photograph is totally superb. Very Touching. TFS, kinds regards , Josée

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  • ariw Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 143 W: 28 N: 171] (2258)
  • [2007-08-07 8:53]

Hi Angelo, I think you did a very good dedication to them, it must be hard for you loosing your loving ones, my deep sympathy to you. Now about the photo, I like the color composition much, the butterfly itself and the flower has made a harmony among the colors, very weldone my friend, ari

Great image with lovely detail & colour.
A beautiful tribute....
Well put together...
Cecilia

Beautiful homage for them.
We will always miss our lost ones. We just need to remember the good times.
TFS
Pierre

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  • k-2 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 605 W: 26 N: 503] (3638)
  • [2007-08-10 17:32]

Beautiful. TFS. K2

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  • tucancr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 580 W: 42 N: 441] (3041)
  • [2007-08-11 16:32]

Hi Angelo,
A great tribute for them. The colors of this butterfly are wonderful, butterfly is very detail and sharp. Good DOF.
Regards,
Iris

Hi Angelo,

as i was looking at ur works i saw this.. very good macro shot of tis butterfly as well as tribute to ur love ones.. kinda sad when i read ur note..

tfs


terry

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  • dbp Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 9 N: 92] (4132)
  • [2007-08-17 2:52]

hello Angelo
great shot with excellent colours
great composition
3 in your scale
beautiful dedication
regards
David

Hi Angelo,
This is incredibly beautiful!!
I'm sorry for the reason which led you to post it though but that's the greatest certainty we have in this life. I wish you all the best.
TFS
Kindest regards,
Lurdes

Hi Angelo,
Again, I'll try to use your scoring system for this nice nacro shot. Do you have any problems with it?

DOF - 3 POV - 3 CREATIVITY - 3 COMPOSITION - 3
LIGHTING - 3 SHARPNESS - 2 COLORS - 3

Average: 2.86

Range:
1 point: Average < 1.99
2 points: Average > 2.00

Scoring System:
1 Good 2 Better 3 Best

Best Regards,
Alex

Beautiful photo Angelo. Amazing light and detail as well as stunning colour. Great macro and touching note. Great job!

A beautiful tribute. I'm reminded of Carl Sagan who once said -
"We are like butterflies who flutter for a day and think it is forever."
Thanks for sharing
Mark

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  • hester Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1320 W: 31 N: 1634] (9994)
  • [2007-09-04 10:52]

Hi Angelo

Lovely bright vibrant picture. Excellent POV and DOF and the sharpness is excellent

TFS

Karan

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  • linus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1825 W: 13 N: 1442] (15482)
  • [2007-09-10 18:32]

Hi Angelo,
Sorry to hear about your loss. I think this picture is a fitting tribute to your loved ones. Beautiful photo.
Sunil

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4436 W: 640 N: 9630] (55118)
  • [2007-09-11 3:16]

Hi Angelo

Nice tribute to your family members. Wonderful colour, sharpness & dof on the butterfly. Tfs!

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  • Jan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 451 W: 139 N: 813] (5358)
  • [2007-09-11 3:21]

It's now september, I see this photo for the first time! A graeat and sharp photo, so you deserve all the points. But the note completes the story. It is good to see what the story or the feeling is behind the photo.
This photo with the note keeps their memorie alive!
Thanks for sharing this with us.

Best regards Janneke

hello angelo,

This is a very beautiful compo,I like the background colors.Nice focus on butterfly.
I'm sorry for your lost,I miss my father too...

Hi...
I'm sorry for your lost...
But I loved your picture and dedication...
I'm sure that They would love it!!!
Thecolors contrast is really charming and original!!
Congrats for the composition and note!!!


Best regards...



Sue

Hi Angelo,
Brilliant and very eye-catching colours.
Focus is very good too !
Well done !
Best regards, Daniel

PS: My sympathies on your loss Angelo - Be well.

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  • EOSF1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1977 W: 301 N: 3060] (26902)
  • [2007-09-20 15:07]

Hello Angelo, great butterfly shot, very sharp, well exposed and a great composition ! Well done,

Mario

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  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 714 W: 2 N: 153] (4206)
  • [2007-09-22 1:51]

Nice COlors and good capture

Hi Anjhello,
What a great shot...
Sharpness and contrast between baxck ground and butterfly.
Congrats...congrats...congrats...
TFS
Selahattin E

Hi Angelo,
very beautyful butterfly,
very nice photo,
Zorica

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  • bzees Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 64 W: 0 N: 23] (366)
  • [2007-10-02 3:52]

A very nice macro, great DOF, colors and composition.

Great work and TFS.

wonderful...

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  • ornis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 148 W: 20 N: 139] (842)
  • [2007-11-07 2:08]

Bonjour Angelo,
Beautiful picture for a tribute to people you love thru your thoughts. Splendid colors and very attractive framing putting the subject high in the composition.
Regards,
Jean-Michel

Copying your system:
Compo : + 10
Colors: + 10
Sharpness: + 10
POV: + 10
DOF: + 10
APPROVED
Greetings
Raimundo

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2441 W: 250 N: 873] (8693)
  • [2007-11-21 18:30]

Beautiful macro shot.Awesome colors and great sharpness.A joy for the eyes! TFS!
Michel

Hi Angelo, this a really beautiful stunning photo. Lovely colours on teh flower and background.
TFS
John Greene.

Hi Angelo,
This is amazing!
Beautiful colours!!

Thank you.
Zoltan

beautiful sharp photo.
Keep the memories in your heart
Cynthia

Hermosa foto, colores muy vividos y brillantes.
Excelente enfoque!

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 624 W: 0 N: 993] (4864)
  • [2008-05-24 18:09]

Dear Angelo,
there is no words to say. Its just wonderful. Really great shot. Beautiful colours, well positiones, great contrast, exciting shot.
Really exciting and arresting.
Regards,
Foozi

Hi Angelo!
Nice picture, the butterfly is really gorgeous, the flower offers a pretty contrast with the color of the insect!!
Love the background too!
TFS
Nice dedicate!
Carine

hi Angelo !

sorry for your family..what happend to them?
beautiful butterfly..
amazing job!
TFS

warm hugs from Italy!
Ania

Very nice compo and colours.

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  • LilDii (39)
  • [2008-11-23 6:54]
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Hi! really beautiful! (love)

Fantastic photo!

Hi Angelo, I find this image very appealing. The shallow DOF throws the emphasis on the subjst well. TFS. Murray.

Hi Angelo,

This is the most memorable gift to remember your dad and sister . I pray for them that GOD rest their soul in peace.

lovely shot and take care of yourself.

best regards

shahbaz

Really Beautiful..
awsome captured, nice timings, I wish ur dad and sister were here to see this
Tfs, may God aware all people tht life is short live happy

Best regards,
waleed

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