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D Auto is Mine


D Auto is Mine
Photo Information
Copyright: cris go (crisgotiny) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 324 W: 0 N: 137] (2350)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-24
Categories: Portrait
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/50 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-08-29 21:09
Viewed: 208
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another shot I took at World Trade Center.

Hope I did good

cris(",)
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To wieyos: thankscrisgotiny 1 08-30 19:33
To burak28: thankscrisgotiny 1 08-30 19:31
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  • mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 159 W: 27 N: 94] (3530)
  • [2008-08-29 21:20]
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Nice frame but if had moved two steps to the right could help more, fill flash is good.

Hi Cris - this isn't bad at all. I think the main compositional point is that it might have been better to have the whole of the wingmirror in the shot - it doesn't sit right clipped like that. Also, could maybe be a little brighter and a smile from the model wouldn't go amiss :-)

That aside, she is looking directly at you/us, she has a model-like pose and there are nice lights in her eyes. Not a bad shot :-)

(but really don't like the watermark)

Hahaha ... the title really fits her pose and expression!

It's not bad - good use of your flash in these conditions. It is definitely a pity you didn't think to change up the ISO, 400 would have given you the luxury of a quicker shutter or a brighter shot; but compositionally this is good.

Rew

Hello Cris,

the absence of her smile confirms her posessiveness as suggested by the title....:)
....a good advertisement message that everyone else must own that nice car...:)

TFS
regards
Agoes

Hi Cris
You look very beautiful
Great colors and clarity
Have a nice weekends
Burak

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