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• athlon (1366)
• [2009-11-01 5:18]
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• metamorphose (475)
• [2009-11-01 5:28]

Hi Arman,

I like the composition very much. And what a sweet but intense look ! Very good use of DOF.

Regards
Pascal-Eric

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• cunejo200 (17675)
• [2009-11-01 12:16]
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Hey Arman,
I like Shazel's fresh and unmade-up look. She looks very engaging in your composition. Ingatz.
Danilo

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• rewshearer (20950)
• [2009-11-01 15:28]
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I like the simple honesty of this portrait. Composition is ok although actually she could be a little more centred, I think!!

Maybe use a smaller aperture, you did a good job getting her leading eye sharp with the f/2.8 but if you used f/4.0 you would get both eyes sharp and still have the blurred background.

Rew

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• rminkow (15656)
• [2009-11-01 17:20]

HI Arman...nice shot...well composed with perfect details.

Roger

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• dilshan74 (2301)
• [2009-11-01 19:34]

Hey Arman,

Simply beautiful portrait here with a lovely natural expression and pose. Her eyes could melt even the hearts of stone and unveil the mysteries of time...I love this one! Well done!

cheers,

Dilshan

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• prometej (1134)
• [2009-11-02 8:46]
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Hi Arman
very good and natural portrait
is it the same girl form previous photo CRAZED?
have a nice week
Riste.

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• WhiteKnight (7715)
• [2009-11-02 22:06]

Unlike Rew's suggestion I like the rather more unusual composition of her face being on the right but looking to our left - works well. I do agree with him about using a slightly narrower aperture to get her left eye focused better.

Nice light!! Nice detail..

DAvid