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• Kilted-Arab (9485)
• [2009-09-25 0:39]
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I quite like this one, Arman, it has a sense of fun about it. The crop is appealling with the head and arm, but I think it maybe needs some slight tweaking - not entirely comfortable with the chin crop, it doesn't feel balanced. I'd either keep the whole chin in or crop down a little more from the top. And possibly in from the right as well, the bright triangle top right is a little distracting.

But, that said, I do still like the fun feel here. Nice image of a pretty girl.

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• AndroK (11908)
• [2009-09-25 0:58]

Hi Arman...
Beautiful portrait with so ice natural light...
Have a nice weekend...
Andro

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• rewshearer (21123)
• [2009-09-25 2:38]
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I appreciate that you had good reason for cropping Grysh's chin but I think this photo illustrates why it's important not to - I think it's ok to crop the top of the head, but not the chin, and there is a sense of incompleteness.

The light is overall good, a little OE on her right arm (our left) and some noise in other areas, but you've managed the background blur well in particular.

She looks like a fun, bubbly, bright model!

Rew

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• athlon (1385)
• [2009-09-25 7:12]
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A cool cool smiling face, lovely.

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• neusser0204 (7252)
• [2009-09-25 10:54]
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Hello Arman,
A nice and beautiful portrait. I like the use of natural light here. Very sharp with nice DOF. TFS
Best regards Siegfried

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• korbee (13759)
• [2009-09-25 12:09]
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Wonderful portrait and very well cropped Arman,her eyes are looking amazing.

jan

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• prometej (1152)
• [2009-09-25 12:33]
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nice shot Arman
the girl have very beautiful eyes
and colors and light are perfect.
take care
Riste

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• dilshan74 (2433)
• [2009-09-25 20:29]
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Fantastic energetic portrait here and although the chin has been cropped off, the four layers of BG space you have achieved creates a very dramatic composition with the shades of BG colour contributing to this well thought out portrait. She is a beautiful girl and her eyes tell me she had great confidence in your ability behind the viewfinder and was having lots of fun! This is what its all about and this image really stands apart because of this and well done!

cheers,

Dilshan

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• rminkow (15854)
• [2009-09-25 20:58]

Hi Arman...great shot...I like the eyes looking more realistic...wonderful composition....great work.

Roger