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• dilshan74 (1913)
• [2009-10-20 3:43]
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Nice sharp portrait here Arman and she is still lucky to escape the terrible aftermath. I do like the portrait but find the left part of the frame does not add any depth to the picture and contains too much negative space. So (surprise-surprise) I have done you a workshop. :-) Please let me know if you like it.

cheers,

Dilshan

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• teamill (5154)
• [2009-10-20 5:46]
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Hi Arman. First of all, thanks for sharing your shots with us .. glad that you can be out there helping these people.
Poor girl .. the whispy hair around her face seems to add to the misery she must be in. She has very expressive, sad eyes .. you captured it well. I don't mind the negative space on the left .. maybe a little less would have been okay though. and I do like the color of the BG.
Nice job Arman
Trudy

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• yopiefranz (1290)
• [2009-10-20 10:58]

Hi Arman,
How are you?
Nice capture of this sweet little girl.
Nice composition and colors.
Wish her the best.

Yopie

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• Lolo54 (1236)
• [2009-10-20 12:38]

good portrait, excellent picture of the girl, sharpness, framing, expression and composition, hugs

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• rewshearer (20799)
• [2009-10-20 15:10]

Good shot, well composed, nice post treatment on her eyes - not so keen on the cropped fingers though!
Rew

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• neusser0204 (7076)
• [2009-10-22 13:44]

Hello Arman.
Good picture.Soft light and impressive girl. Looking forward to see some more good pictures from you.Thanks and best regards
Siegfried