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stare
Photo Information
Copyright: bon aserios (bonaserios) (99)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-08-29
Categories: Portrait
Camera: nikon d40, Nikkor 18-55/3.5-5.6 DX
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-09-30 18:14
Viewed: 741
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 36
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
another angle of one of my photo...
added a little bit of desaturation on the skin and then added sharpening and contrast on the cloth
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Such a beautiful and captivating photo... colors and detail, softness and intensity... and those gorgeous eyes. WOW! TFS

Your work is very well done... looking forward to seeing more... :)

Larry

I hate Philippines guys. Most of them are excellent photographers. Just kidding; but it is true; I ask myself, many times, is there in Philippines a special photographers school, or is only a talent you are born with. Great composition, pretty soft colors of a beautiful girl. TFS (thanks for sharing)

Lorena

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  • salil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 581 W: 18 N: 295] (2106)
  • [2008-09-30 18:52]
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Beautiful eyes. Excellent sharpness. Her eyes are so expressive and luminous.
One point though. The hand seems a little intrusive ... Notwithstanding that -- thank you for a very attractive post.

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 831 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2008-09-30 18:54]
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nice portrait Bon. great angle and framing. Tfs

OgGie

>uploading a larger image is better. :)

hello bon..
good portrait, the eye is very sharp, this color is natural, well done.....

Hi Bon,
Great portrait and beautiful eyes expression and colors, Great catch and very well done.
Welcome on TL.and good job..
Compliments
Michel

Muito belo esse portrait. Gosto das cores e da suavidade da pele. Parabens bon.
Cumprimentos,
Carol

Hi Bon

Nice work, you did well with this! It almost has the style of your fellow pinoy, Manny Librodo, who is well respected here at TL - he certainly is an inspiration!

The composition here is excellent, good placement of the eyes. I am a little bothered by the signature, maybe it could be more subtly placed, and the shot itself is quite small - take full advantage of the 800 pixel limit!

Rew

Hi!
Beutiful shot! The eyes of woman are wonderful and your POV too! TFS.

Regards.

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  • JoMo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 52 W: 0 N: 53] (447)
  • [2008-09-30 22:58]
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Nicely cropped and the pp work is very effective. The model has the most amazing eyes, and you captured them beautifully.

Nice Portrait, and her eyes are really striking. Other then the small posting size that has already been mentioned, the thing that makes me wonder about this image is the slight greying of the black eye pupils, which usually means that the eyes have been lightened a lot in post processing. Maybe burning the low lights in again in PS would help this to look just a little more natural?

wow, beautifull portrait, tfs Joke

First of all welcome to TL and I hope you enjoy it here as much as I do. A beautiful portrait!! The eyes are awesome, and I like the lighting and skin tones. Great job! TFS

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  • korbee Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1399 W: 0 N: 1698] (13701)
  • [2008-10-01 13:11]
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Looks like the work of Steve McCurry,,professional job here Bon.
jan

Hi Bon..beautiful shot...excellent composition..great details.

Roger

later

hello bon

I think this is a great stare and a powerful portrait except that it is really too small in file size and pixel. You should really do justice by 800pixel max.

This is only 372x250pixel.

But you have done a good job with the light control and skin tone.

TFS, bill

Beautiful lovely eyes. Excellent Composition. Green eyes are so beautiful and saying much more.

Gorgeous Eyes, different point of view.

Great capture.

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