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Sisters
Photo Information
Copyright: Fourleaf Clover (Tinky) Silver Note Writer [C: 9 W: 2 N: 16] (415)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-04-04
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Pentax K100D Super, Pentax SMC-FA/F 100-300mm f/4.5-5.6, 62 mm HOYA UV filter
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-04-26 10:18
Viewed: 212
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo has been transformed from coloured to B&W, did a bit of re-exposure, then resize.
Any suggestions to make this look a lot better are very much welcome.
Happy Sunday everyone!
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Very good photo.The sister bond is extreme here.
very good capture of warmth.
Good job,

Regards,

Thomas

Hi Tinky

A smaller aperture. The girl in the black top is more in focus than the younger child; an aperture of f/9 or f/11 would fix that.

A closer crop, too, to remove some of the unnecessary space above and to the left.

Rew

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