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Copyright: Angelo Dulay (anjhello) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1009 W: 54 N: 291] (4660)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-07-02
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/60 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): 50 points and more, (",), 100 points or more [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-07-05 23:27
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Points: 108
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  • Great 
  • dalia Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 218 W: 0 N: 37] (608)
  • [2006-07-06 2:59]

Hi Angelo,
They're very cute...and I like that there is no background.
Dalia

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  • btokaz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1060 W: 127 N: 167] (5744)
  • [2006-07-06 16:39]

Nice shot Angelo. Good expression and PP work...
Tomasz

pts later

a precious moment indeed. I have no problems with the white background but i wished that the highlights on the lower left corner wasn't so overblown. I posted a picture in the workshop and cropped some of the overexposed areas.

Hello Angelo,

Don't you just love how Filipino kids shine infront of cameras. The kids here are adorable. Good portrait.

Salamat,
Danilo

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  • ose Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 508 W: 0 N: 18] (5420)
  • [2006-07-10 18:48]

Hi Angelo
What a nice pose this kids giving you. Great light and colours. Also good sharpnes and details.
Well done

osse

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2847 W: 263 N: 5947] (23588)
  • [2006-07-10 23:41]

aawwwwwwww -- so cUte! This is delightful: you have three distinct personalities shining through the group portrait. The background allows the dark heads to stand out so much better and there is little to disract from the subjects (except that flare on the arm on the left -- sorry).
TFS
Silke

Hi Angelo
I don't know if I've said this to you before, but I believe the power of a great photograph is its ability to evoke emotion. A technically great shot can still leave the viewer cold.
Technically I don't know how good this is, but this photo made me smile - and the star of it is that little fellow in the middle, peering between his mates to be in the shot. Delightful work. TFS
Rew (smiley to come)

Hello Angelo,very good high key with well saturatedcoluors!!
very well done!!
claudio

Cute boys in a good shot with a nice white background (my favorite background). thanks.

Ver nice portrait of these young boys, Angelo. I like their expression & the joy coming through their faces. I like the workshop done by Milko as I was like him and found the left side a bit over-exposed. Otherwise, very nicely done!

Nice shot. I like this group portrait.
Well done!

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  • yer6 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 233 W: 40 N: 118] (1366)
  • [2006-07-12 21:08]

every face is telling different feelings; amazement, curiousity, joy. and i like your use of high-key effect.. bravo angelo..

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  • MikiM Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 5 N: 19] (278)
  • [2006-07-13 2:11]

HI Angelo,
Very nice moment in high-light key. The overexposed left side is a bit distracting - you could make a narrow crop from this picture - if you want. The idea also good!
Congrats,
Miklós

Hi Angelo,
The kids are in playful mood. Wonderful expression on their face. I like the smile of the first boy on the right side. Well done.


Srinivasan

Hello Angelo ,
A cute moment captured here! Funny shot indeed but a bit overexposed. I propose you a little WS.
Hope yoou will find it constructive (^_^)
Cheers!
Robert

Hola Angelo,
Very nicely capturing happy faces of the kids. Great shot.

Ben Lakitan

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3312 W: 788 N: 4424] (19910)
  • [2006-07-17 11:20]
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I add my voice to all the others to congratulate you on this beautiful photo. The pose of the children is very natural and their smile very communicative. It is the strong point of your photo! Annie

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  • egerie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor [C: 643 W: 135 N: 266] (1968)
  • [2006-07-17 20:59]

It's very well done with the pp and composition...

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  • riems Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 115 W: 14 N: 45] (1677)
  • [2006-07-17 23:31]

What a great portrait, Angelo! TFS, Peter

heyyy.. they are realy cute... nice shot TFS

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  • nova Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2735 W: 263 N: 864] (8653)
  • [2006-07-18 23:44]

Beautiful portrait,Angelo! Amazing composition! Nice expressions captured on the faces of those three young models! Well done! Michel

Hi Angelo,
Wonderful shot of the three small boys at play. Good PP work and lovely colour. TFS,
David
Many thanks for your comment on
Tamar Fog

Very precious in deed. Well caught. We never have too much of that in our souvenir albums.

Ben.

Very creative Angelo. You seem to have caught the joy in the faces of these youngsters. We could learn a few thing from them.

Joe

very good
you put all the ation on the boy's
woth there new toys
Good work

Hi Angelo,
Excellent Happy Kids portrait.
I like your pov,their expressions,smiles,colors,frame and composition.TFS
Chris

Hello Angelo, are they your kids? This high key image works very well for this colourful and candid shot.

Great moment you captured here with the kids playing with their dinosaurs :)

I think that croping on the sides is better, looking at the ws.

Overall, very well done! Take care, Yan :)

p.s. many thx for your review on my "Sailing into the fog" photo.

Indeed, very very precious! Excellent Photo. I like overexposed background, but it is pitty for that hand on the left side is also overxposed.

Keep the good work!

Hi Angelo,

Indeed a happy momment. I felt happy when I saw this picture of yours. Nicely done. TFS.

Regards,
Jomari

Nice portrait Angelo.
TFS

Fantastic! Good the way you finished this photo with the white background and the three boys look very niceand sharp. Take care
Rob
points are coming

  • Great 
  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3274 W: 268 N: 7755] (33082)
  • [2006-08-25 6:28]

Yes, a very precious moment, a great one to keep. Well presented Angelo, super colours against the white BG too. Well done,
Jnice

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  • lopa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1083 W: 244 N: 847] (8927)
  • [2006-08-27 10:59]

Hi Angelo,
What a excelent composition. They are very very cute.
Excelent sharpnes and details.
well done... thanks for sharing
Lopa

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  • iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610)
  • [2006-09-03 23:44]

Hi Angelo, nice pose, also I like the brightness and colors. Thanks for sharing!
Erin

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  • Emma Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1403 W: 6 N: 1920] (10151)
  • [2006-09-04 11:27]

Hello Angelo,
Very good group portrait,creative idee and good colours .Wonderful Job.
Greetings.
Eva

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  • SkyF Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1666 W: 136 N: 1263] (6138)
  • [2006-09-07 10:47]

Hello Angelo,
this shot is adorable. You captured a special moment. Lovely poses from the boys and their facial expression are wonderful.
TFS..Sky

This is precious..beautfiul Photo TFS
Donna :o)

I like their expressions... nice capture KABAYAN!

Excellent portrait, very good light and framing.Adorable kids, with their toy-dinosaurs.

Andreea

Hello Angelo

Me encanto la composicón sin lugar a duda una imagen memorable buen trabajo

Nat

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 832 W: 52 N: 418] (10391)
  • [2006-12-14 3:36]

nice portrait angelo galing ng expressions.
i like the sharpness and colors. tfs

Shogun

Well done! With this one. beautiful!

Hello Angelo,
This is a wonderful and meaningful of photo! You subject is truelly matching with your title,
Just wonder 20 years later when they look back at this photo ?
good job
thanks for sharing
Selamat
Tony

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  • drymd29 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1447 W: 248 N: 654] (7621)
  • [2006-12-19 15:30]
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Very good Angelo; these face are eternal; the joy and the curiousity are great here. The whitening of the background is a good idea.
Huub

  • Great 
  • Konie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 29 N: 298] (3006)
  • [2007-01-08 1:20]

Simple yet it evokes a strong emotion. It reminds us of the happiness we experienced when we were their age. Now that we are all grown ups, we miss those little joys of being kids. Thanks for reminding us of the past through this lovely photo Angelo. Mabuhay ka kabayan!

Konie

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  • bemawu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 87 W: 64 N: 75] (1607)
  • [2007-01-08 21:59]

Hi Angelo, very strong and effective composition. Nice one.

  • Great 
  • karn Silver Star Critiquer [C: 27 W: 0 N: 8] (620)
  • [2007-02-17 3:29]

Hi Angelo
It's lovely shot very precious indeed.
Regards,Karn

Ganda ng exposure neto with the skintones and you've captured a precious moment indeed! well done. TFS

jowhite

Great expressions captured here. I like photos with emotions. My only suggestion might be to crop the left hand side as the bright arm is distracting. Overall it is a very minor point, as the faces make the image. THe light on the faces is pleasant also!

Hi Angelo! Lovely expressions on their faces. I love the colors and tones. The OE and white BG worked well. Happy 100th on this one ;)
TFS,
Freddie :)

**** POV
**** Focus
**** Lighting
*** Composition
**** Impact
- Note

Hi Angelo,

Lovely kids' expression. You captured this moment very well.

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Des bouilles adorables, bien mises en valeur par ce fond blanc, de belles couleurs saturées, joli portrait !
Marie

Hello...
Lovelly portrait....
Very happy and colorful...
I loved...
Congrats for thee composition and POV
Thanks for sharing..



Best regards...


Sue

Absolutely great job here Angelo, also love the cheeky expression of the children!
TFS
Els
:)follow

Hi Angelo,
the 'burned-out' look in the background works well here !
Well done. Best regards, Daniel

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