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Brotherly Care II


Brotherly Care II
Photo Information
Copyright: Andy Domondon (andydomondon) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 62 W: 7 N: 77] (912)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-09-26
Categories: Friends/Family, Portrait
Camera: Canon 350 D
Exposure: f/6.7, 1/30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Babies & Children all Over The World Part II [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2007-10-06 2:56
Viewed: 559
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
2nd series of Brotherly Care

I laid down my youngest kid and ask the eldest to go beside his brother and pose in different poses. This time I don't have struggle and worries for the little one to get hurt.

Same lighting setup as my previously upload Father and Sons

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To Jeruel: Salamatandydomondon 1 10-07 09:16
To Colorful: Thanksandydomondon 1 10-07 09:09
To kappas: thanksandydomondon 1 10-07 09:06
To rewshearer: posesandydomondon 1 10-07 09:05
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Lighting here is good mate - once again. Your lights are obviously very much up to the job and I can see that all your portraits are going to be excellent from now on! The WB and background colours are excellent, crisp and white.

I'm not so sure about the poses here, though - your elder son's arm is cropped off at the wrist. Maybe it would be better if he had his hand cradling his little brother's head, or something similar? The other element is your youngest's deflected attention: he's looking at something I'm sure, but it's neither the camera, nor his elder brother. I think that element of eye contact is crucial in a shot like this, although perhaps he's even too young to look directly at people yet?

Overall though this is nice work.

Rew

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  • [2007-10-06 18:22]
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Hello Andy,

Lovely capture of your two beautiful children. TFS, Bobbi.

Hi,Andy,
Lovely pic.This pic is very nice,I like how the brother protect the little baby.And veri nice color.
Thanks Leanne

This is another inspiring shot... :)

Jeruel

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