diligence "faceless portrait"

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• lavan (3446)
• [2009-03-06 0:40]

nice shot
good capture
nice to see

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• AndroK (11826)
• [2009-03-06 1:02]

Hi Louie...
Nice action shot...
Nice colors, composition...
Regards...
Andro

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• deepakbabbar (335)
• [2009-03-06 1:14]
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Nice capture of a person at work....but could have been better if rule of third was used as well

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• Royaldevon (16516)
• [2009-03-06 1:39]
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Hello Louie,

You have some excellent features on this shot.
I love how you have the red board disappearing into the r/h corner, perfectly balanced by the pole at the opposite side of the boat. There is great movement in the body language of the figure.

However, the composition is too central.
I have done a w/s, with your permission, to illustrate what I mean.
I do hope you like it.

Kind regards,
Bev :-)

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• ikas (196)
• [2009-03-06 2:26]

this is wonderful shol, great composition and detail

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• Redrubin (0)
• [2009-03-06 3:27]

Hi Louie
the pov here is fantastic like the effect of the red boat in the sea
ciao
Lucio

Have nice week end

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• willie (3101)
• [2009-03-06 4:56]

Hi,

Lovely idea for the theme. It's a nice scene and i like the colour red in it. But i agree with Bev, her workshop is making it stronger imo. But anyway; a good contribution...

regards, willie