<< Previous Next >>

red wine


red wine
Photo Information
Copyright: joel forte (joelforte) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 109 W: 2 N: 105] (1150)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-07-29
Categories: Food
Exposure: f/22, 6 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-08-03 2:34
Viewed: 155
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
another try on still life
Add Critique [Critiquing Guidelines] 
Only registered TrekLens members may write critiques.
Discussions
ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To urs0114: hijoelforte 1 08-04 20:28
To skhawar: hijoelforte 1 08-04 20:28
To Travelcam: hijoelforte 1 08-04 20:27
To rewshearer: hijoelforte 1 08-04 20:25
You must be logged in to start a discussion.

Critiques [Translate]

Good subject mate, I think this needs a little more room and a little more light IMO.

Room - because there should be space around your subject, particularly on the left and right where the bottle's cork and the grapes are nearly touching the edges of teh frame.

Light - because it's all a little indistinct, and while it would be a shame to lose some of the rich dynamic and mystery you have created, we do need to see the subject a little more clearly, I think.

Rew

Hi Joel,

This is really appealing photograph. Well composed and photographed. Very classy and exquisite IMO. Your idea of bringing together the grapes, bottle and the glass of red wine (a chronological sequence) is really impressive too! Creative and well presented work. Well done! TFS.

Martyn

Beautiful shot with nice colors and, composition...nice stilllife
great job done
regards.
khawar

Salut Joel.
Très beau travail de mise en forme et de présentation.
Ces images sombres sont de toutes beautés. Bravo.
Bonne journée.
Urs

Calibration Check
















0123456789ABCDEF