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Fries


Fries
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Copyright: Aln En (Ang) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 15 W: 0 N: 0] (96)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-03-06
Categories: Daily Life
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-22 10:03
Viewed: 127
Points: 0
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somewhere in Quezon City, Philippines...
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Interesting subject but poorly composed and cropped.

Note details like the "orphaned" street light at the top left edge of the frame, and the half-car at the bottom left.

Your subject - I presume the giant fries - occupies barely 15% of the frame and is centrally placed. If you cropped this more tightly - or zoomed in - you would allow the structure to occupy more of the frame and therefore have its rightful dominance.

I think your POV is a problem too. Not only are the fries very small in the frame, but they are half obscured by other signs, so as a subject they are seriously challenged by other elements of the photograph.

Rew

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