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Filipina at Sariaya market


Filipina at Sariaya market
Photo Information
Copyright: Andre Scherpenberg (dedsharp) (90)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05-20
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment, Portrait
Camera: Sony Alpha DSLR A300, SAL 18-250
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/1000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-07-17 7:30
Viewed: 188
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Filipina at the Sariaya market.
Something went wrong with the colors when I uploaded. I will just leave it this way, it gives a nice artistic effect.
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To rewshearer: tipsdedsharp 2 07-18 12:27
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The colours look fine to me André. I really like the contrast between the tone of her skin and the denim-blue background.

Composition could be much better. Why did you put her face in the center of the photograph? Why did you leave so much space above, and on either side of her? Try composing this according to Rule of Thirds (more of a guideline than a rule, but it often works!) and see how it looks.

Also this was oversharpened, see the v of her top, and the side of her neck, where there are whiteish lines - "ghosting" - that comes from too much post sharpening.

It's a shame you have turned off your Workshop option, it would be good to show you how this could look with an alternative composition/crop.

Rew

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