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dalampasigan
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Copyright: tutay alcantara (tutay) (19)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-06-08
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-09-24 1:28
Viewed: 452
Points: 9
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beautiful place and photo
good place to vacation
Sabina

Hello Tutay,
This looks like Boracay. What a wonderful beach scene with gorgeous clouds and water. This would look better if the horizon is leveled. I noticed this also in your previous posting. And a belated welcome to TL. I would suggest that you actively participate in the commenting/critiquing of other photographers' postings if you want to people to look at your photos. This will force you to look at other photos with critical eyes, and it's a good learning process. Ingat Tutay! Danilo

Hi Tutay,
I liked the simlicity of the compo, I think there is a problem with sharpness, and the horizon line is skewed, but ı liked the different coloured layers and pastel tones
By the way wellcome to TE :)
Selnur

Good placement of the bamboo to the left-hand-side of the frame.

Watch out for the tilted horizon, this probably needs to be rotated clockwise by 10 or 20 degrees!

Also - if you wish to receive critiques of your work, I suggest you make critiques of other people. And try to include a photographer's note - it's polite!

Rew

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  • [2008-09-24 4:56]

It would be perfect without the tilt. I appreciated greatly your subject tutay.

Iso.

Hello Tutay,
I make a workshop from this photo and I hope that you like it.and give some advice. Kind greetings,
Frieda.

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