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| [Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note |
| a shot of my friends on the beach. :) |
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Looks just like a gratuitous snap of two bikini-clad girls, not even an attempt at serious photography. Perhaps if you'd written a proper photographer's note we'd have a better idea of your intentions here.
In addition, I see you've posted 40 snaps but only made 4 critiques. I don't know whether you have read the site guidelines, but in there are suggestions on how to participate properly on the site.
Where to start......
* the composition is poor - no contact with the eyes, only seeing one face
* the sky is badly overexposed
* the colours and skin tones are flat
As Richard says, its an exploitative snapshot. And with 10 pictures for every 1 critique you're not exactly entering into the spirt of TL as a community are you?