Boracay ii

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• Robert-E (1618)
• [2009-03-26 18:16]

Nice pose, great surroundings. Only thing that bothers me a bit is that foot you cut off. I would not crop the picture so tight, to include the foot. Colors could be a little stronger too. Tilted picture works nice here. Very nice picture, congrats.

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• dedsharp (90)
• [2009-03-27 1:27]

This one and the other version looks very good. I like the PP you did. Can u still tell what you did in PS. I like the clarity in the colors make this result look modern and fashionable. So, sorry Robert E, I don't agree with you about the color strength. The scaled paint on the boat does the trick. Composition is good, maybe you should have included the foot too, but I am sure that would change the picture format too much.

Best regards,
André

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• rewshearer (20678)
• [2009-03-27 15:02]

Your wife makes a good subject.

I don't mind the tilt on this shot. The cropped foot is a little bothersome, and your post-work has created quite a strong 'halo' around her shoulder. I like the reflection of the banca's shape in her sunglasses.

Rew

p.s. if you want to receive feedback on your photos, may I suggest you also critique other people's photos?

Critiquing is a great exercise in both learning about photography, and making acquaintances with other photographers.

Rew