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"Kalan"


Photo Information
Copyright: Irene Jeongco (VisualArtist_99) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 10 N: 24] (195)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-05
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/4.5
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-06-12 8:23
Viewed: 166
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
While our helper was cooking, she used the "kalan". When I saw the fire dancing, I immediately took my camera and took many shots.
I believe this is the best one from a bunch.

Cropped, sharpened and despeckled using Adobe Photoshop.

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To muhammadtariq: thank youVisualArtist_99 1 06-17 07:50
To rewshearer: thanks for the workshopVisualArtist_99 1 06-13 07:44
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Hi Irene

Nice simple capture. I think it's important to re-sharpen after resizing for TrekLens - did you do that?

Also, looking at this again, in my opinion that little gap at the lower right of the shot distracts from the purity of the shot, how would it look if it was cloned out?

I'll try a workshop. :)

Rew

I like the fire flames and textures of wood ,you have very well captured them.The POV is intelligently chosen.Great post infact.

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