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Red Fountain


Red Fountain
Photo Information
Copyright: Eman Muncal (graemann) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 368 W: 61 N: 216] (5128)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-03-03
Categories: Architecture, Experimental
Camera: Canon Powershot A610
Exposure: f/4.1, 1/25 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Yellow (II) [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2006-03-05 3:56
Viewed: 391
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
As I and the Missus walking around SM Megamall, a local mall here in Ortigas, Pasig City. We came accross a colorful fountain. This was red after PPed. Original was yellow lighting. The place was St. Francis Square. I wanted to share you the image.

Editing:
Sharpen +2 clicks
Saturation +3 clicks.
Resized.
Framed.
Sig.


Hope you like it. =)
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To modalus: Hello S.graemann 1 09-16 04:48
To kitflorendo: Hi Kit.graemann 1 03-09 17:23
To samr: Thanks Samgraemann 1 03-06 20:48
To chrisJ: Thanksgraemann 1 03-05 08:06
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Hi Emmanuel- nice idea for a photo- I like the framing around this one!

Best regards,
Steve

Hi Emmanuel

Good use of the principle of 3. I like the warm red & orange colors. Well done!

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  • samr Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 758 W: 44 N: 433] (3323)
  • [2006-03-06 2:51]
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Hi Manny,
Nice shot of the fountain - looks like lava flowing from red hot rock. Minor thing - it is slightly crooked horizontally, and there is some noise. Still, very well done.TFS,
Sam

Nice picture and of course...lighting. keep up the good work.

There is enough of an intentional tilt to get away with the idea that it could be an error - but only just ;)
Graininess after PP is OK and your selection of three tiers is a good choice.
The distracting top RH corner? I would have cropped that out.
Also, while this is well-spotted and treated, I do feel that this is a case of "There is always a tighter crop" and I would have certainly gone in a LOT closer to pick up detail of the water flow and maybe at more of an angle? Visual impact would have been raised a few levels?
Then again - I wasn't there.
Good variety, E. Variety is the way to go!

ohhhchh I can feel the heat from this. I love the way you describe how you edited the images (ie 2 clicks 3 clicks) this is very useful.

The frame here is fine.
but again I would not have put in
the title caption.
S.

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