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• allanbarredo (7765)
• [2006-12-12 4:24]
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Hello Walter,

Very good capture (light, colours and details), except for that bothersome tilt :)

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• Shogun (10391)
• [2006-12-12 4:48]
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nice capture Walter. ayus yun shot parang masungit yun sweetheart mo. lol! inspired talaga si Walter! nice lighting. Tfs

Shogun

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• peetol (5743)
• [2006-12-12 10:44]
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Galing ng capture mo, Walter! Iba talaga kapag inspired! :) Pero na cut mo yung fingers niya. Do not crop the fingers, bro. Always be aware of this when you take the shot. Be aware also of the tilt, unless over 45deg na, medyo artsy na ang dating. :) Great capture of the expression! Tsk, iba kayong dalawa. Parang may chemistry! :)

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• bombilla (1950)
• [2006-12-12 16:08]
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Nice colors, Walter. Good tones on her hair and skin. The framing of the concrete box -- or whatever that is -- is a little bothersome, because it sort of tilts into the frame. Bothers me, anyway. Cutting off the fingers of her right hand seems like an error. Not sure about the expression on her face. She looks angry, but, to me, it's not a really strong expression -- yet nor is it pleasantly ambiguous (with often works). There are things working, but with this one, it's not all coming together for me. Just my opinion. I'm sure you'll keep trying and keep getting better. Looking forward to seeing more. -Hugh

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• jovienaval (2264)
• [2006-12-12 22:34]
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hi bro Walts,
nice shot and I hope you like my ws too, hehehe!

the Seductive Effect!

thanx!
jovs

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• hydroxycut (3557)
• [2006-12-13 0:00]
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Nice angle dre! also the sudctive effect! mag nigawa ako worshop baka magustuhan mo :D

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• u2y (1172)
• [2006-12-13 2:17]
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nice capture, bro!
i ask her not to look at me this time...ahehehe

good work, cropping is the only flaw i see=)

francis

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• rewshearer (20821)
• [2006-12-13 18:25]
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Hi Walter
Your series of Nadine is good - sharp, with very good lighting especially.
She's a beautiful model, too.
There are elements of the pose and the composition that make me a little uncomfortable. The angled edges of her enclosure, for a start: I think it would be better to either shoot from a point-of-view that made the alcove align with the edges of the photograph (or rotate the shot so that it does so) or find a way to crop the edges out altogether.
Speaking of crop - the missing thumb and first-finger of her left hand. It's a minor detail but it spoils the image, I feel.
I actually wonder if this shot should be cropped far more tightly to include only her torso and face?
These are only thoughts and criticisms (as invited) - the work is good!
Rew

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• graemann (5124)
• [2006-12-13 20:00]
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Galing bro. At nasabi na nila cropped fingers and tilt. All in all, well capture.

I like Master PePe X's workshop =)

TFS.