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Copyright: Antony Yong (TonyFoto) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 399 W: 55 N: 319] (3734)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-12-02
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 5D, Canon 24-105mm f/4L IS
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/100 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-12-26 9:12
Viewed: 1541
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
After many shots, she is getting much more confortable in front of the camera.
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Good expression & pose.

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  • moli Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1418 W: 275 N: 1967] (12108)
  • [2006-12-26 17:15]

Nice one portrait Antony. I like your composition. Best of Luck. J-23

very comfortable image - i thank her for posing - tfs

Hi Tony
Excellent use of available light in this shot, very good catchlights in her eyes and good edges along her arm. Well composed and well posed, a good expression from your model.
My only suggestion in future is that you suggest more subdued pants for her to wear, those stripes are quite garish and distracting. Blue jeans would have been better?
Rew

  • Great 
  • pemi71 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 539 W: 13 N: 59] (2619)
  • [2007-01-14 10:30]

You have portrayed this beautiful woman very well, I like the eye contact from her wonderful eyes, the very nice colour and the good crop. Well done.

tfs

Petar

i like this portrait
her pose is very natural
good one Antony
tfs.
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