getting older

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• jingmag (303)
• [2007-02-12 20:43]

Max!

Hi! Kamusta! Nice subject choice. You'll notice however that the part of her hair in the light is washed out and her eyes are hidden in shadows. This is a tricky situation. Mahirap humabol ng details if you have extremes of light. Maybe if you asked her to turn to her left to face the light source and step away from the direct light then mas pantay yung light, panay reflected light lang. Then to emphasize her age, which is what i think you want, get a close crop of her lined face so yun lang ang kita sa frame. One more time... :-)