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Copyright: Allan Barredo (allanbarredo) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 598 W: 72 N: 702] (6930)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-01-28
Categories: Decisive Moment, Mood
Camera: Nikon D-50
Exposure: f/8, 1/800 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-02-23 4:11
Viewed: 938
Favorites: 2 [view]
Points: 58
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Ive been out of TL circulation lately, been confined in a hospital for 4 days. So whats the first thing I did after I got out? POST TO TL :D

This has been in the pipeline for sometime now so I decided to post it today since I cant decide what mood Im in :P. (and no time to PP new pics)

This started when Oggie (shogun) wanted something moody as a wallpaper. So he drafted an idea (he wanted to be the model) and then we went to the Heroes Cemetary with Jing (jingmag).

I executed the shot using his camera, I was lying flat on my belly (sniper style) when I shot this.

Xavier (hydroxycut) did the base PP, and we just added our own finishing touches.

... And this is the result of synergy in TL :)

GreenBaron, memphis1972, Souvlakolikos, jovienaval, erdna, saglamer, kulimpapat has marked this note useful
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To kulimpapat: Thanks Amri!allanbarredo 1 07-29 23:08
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That's hounting me so much, a very impressive shot. What elso should I say, it's perfect - also the choose of black/white.
Thanks and greetings
Sabine - wishnugaruda

superb... strong and moody. Excellent choice of the pov and the tones

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  • yanm Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 530 W: 40 N: 688] (7239)
  • [2007-02-23 4:20]
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Very good Allan. Including using the cross as a perspective.
For my own taste, I will reduce more of the brightness to make it has a darker mood. Like grieving ??

Yan

Dramatic ang shot! Galing pa ng combination ng talent and skills nyo. I like the perspective of the leaning crosses, incredible POV... Well done! TFS

jowel

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  • kiti Gold Star Critiquer [C: 231 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2007-02-23 4:40]
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dramatic spectacular image and, good photo kiti

wow, really impressive photo !!!
Very well done; many congrats !

v

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1701 W: 0 N: 1] (11482)
  • [2007-02-23 4:54]
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Hi Allan
This is a picture wish emotion.
Good perspectief. good comp.
Gr Jos

Hi Allan,
I'm glad your back from the hospital. Take care my friend!

Regarding this photo a stunning composition well executed, it shows magnificent mood! Saying something like: "stay together strong in hard times". Job well done with your Philippine TL-bro's :)

Hans

Thats a very sad one indeed. Its calm and serene. Very sad. I like the way you have caught this moment, more than remorse it seems like a tribute. The b/w treatment is befitting the subject. The pov and perspective is nice and the textures are wellc aptured. A very haunting and memorable shot indeed.

Hi Allan, baka hindi ospital ang kailangan mo...rehab na, dahil adik ka sa pag-post, hahaha! Kidding aside, I hope you're feeling better now.

Ganda ng shot, malinaw pa rin kahit sa malayo ah. Dabest ang composition. Galing din mag-emote ng subject mo, hehehe.

Wow,

thats a powerful photo.

Composition POV all really nice.

Thanks for posting.

Kind regards

Colin

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  • Konie Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 365 W: 29 N: 292] (2916)
  • [2007-02-23 6:03]
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Hi Allan,

Super na super ito. Sa lahat ng bagay ay matindi. Iba talaga pag pinagsamasama ang galing ng mga taga TL ano? Good to have you back posting again. Namiss ka namin ng ilang araw din dito. Ingat bro and happy weekend.

Konie

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  • Shogun Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 859 W: 52 N: 415] (10122)
  • [2007-02-23 10:28]
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Sabi nga ni Ron . . . galing mag-emote ng
Model mo! LOL! adik ka bro kakalabas lang ng
hosp upload na agad. hehe. tfs

Shogun

I think it's outstanding work Allan. Great composition and light here, the sweep of the gravestones and their shadow across the grass is excellent, and the placement of your subject is great.
Good vignetting with the sky, and I like that your subject's face is kept in shadow.
Excellent work!
Rew

pov is great, b/w tone is good. i like this drama effect,u guys are like directing a movie.
i wld try increase the contrast to give greater intense since it is 'remorse'. done a workshop experiment,hope u like it:)

very dramatic and beautiful...perfect composition and PP...although the workshop is good...i prefer the wider crop of the original...i like the depth it has...beaufiul synergy...peace***

very nice concept bro! =)
though i think the attire couldve been more appropriate or better.

thanks for sharing!

Bonjour.
Très belle composition avec une bonne mise en scène du personnage.
Belle utilisation du noir et blanc.
Félicitations !

une image extraordinaire et très forte
je n'ai qu'un mot à dire : woaw

very striking image and full of emotions!
nice helping touch from the TL-Phils coregroup! ;-)

All I can say is Wow. Galing ng model mo dre. hehe. Mukang mahal magpabook jan ehehe.

Excellent bro. Created by Masters. pAti model Master hehe.

TFS.

Hi Allan...the "sniper style" works very well indeed, super POV. The inclusion of your model works as well, balances the image nicely against the curve of the crosses.

And I agree that b/w is the right way for a shot in this cemetry. Nice one!

The best mood shot, pre! :D ngaa na confine ka? :)

What a superb capture this is. Love the POV. The tone you chose is suits the image and the mood so well. Woderful shot. Well done.

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 686 W: 70 N: 749] (5148)
  • [2007-03-07 18:45]

This is a very nice photo with a strong imagery and using a superb angle of view! Ver well done work.

Thank you for your comments on my photo, "Sunrise at the Fishpond".

Andre'

I like the compo, the idea, and impact of the processed photo. I did not like the workshop posted. I like this original version. very interesting.

Very meaningful picture. Great compo and POV, thanks for sharing.

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  • mansua Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 712 W: 35 N: 24] (2113)
  • [2007-03-27 23:34]

Excelente.
Felicitaciones Allan.
Saludos.

Hi Allan

I love the team work you all have done, for this image this is very original, I mean the idea is fantastic the prespective is so marvellous and the model, SHOGUN is very natural.... to all of you and for you Congratulation. It shows with the teamwork everybody wins

Amri HMS

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