Kate_fashion photo

Critiques [Translate]

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• mamcg (4624)
• [2007-03-20 23:08]

Her hands are more lighted then her face so her face looks dull, it is a rule of fourth not third most part is cut but I like this,
TFS.

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• lollie (62)
• [2007-03-21 0:20]

Hi Cristina,
lovely composition and nice expression.
Bravo.

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• jingmag (303)
• [2007-03-21 5:16]

nice lighting and compo Tina. Must look good in B&W too. welcome to TL...

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• rychousmama (228)
• [2007-03-22 0:49]

Despite what some others have said I actually like the cropping in this, it draws focus to her face and hands, emphasizes her expression, and also makes the breeze and movement in her hair more interesting. Although I would also prefer a little more lighting on the face I think that the lighting from the side helps to bring out contours and textures. Excellent range of tones and contrasts, I really like the plain background with the soft gradient of lighting and shadow. Very good composition and I love how she is at the side, it leades the eye all around the shot. Really nice work! TFS!
-Lara

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• jovienaval (2304)
• [2007-03-22 2:02]

hi tina,

great eye to eye contact with the viewer ;-)
welcome to TL and enjoy!
cheers.
jovie