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• moody (49)
• [2007-09-21 5:28]

Wow what an excellent idea, very appealing.
I like the enterence and all is good for camera controls and lights etc.
cheers, moody

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• ola_kwiatek (9007)
• [2007-09-21 9:30]

Hi! Original picture!

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• allanbarredo (7765)
• [2007-09-21 12:10]
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• Usaf (1482)
• [2007-09-21 12:40]

Nice idea, the entrance is good,what i feel if u let her move a bit more towards left, not too much just couple of inches more I would become amazing. Still its amazing and good experiment.
TFS
Usaf

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• hamperium (0)
• [2007-09-21 23:46]

intresting picture with nice pov
like to see those kind of composition
its different but ok!
good colours and sharpness

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• graemann (5124)
• [2007-10-15 4:26]

Unusual crop! Attention grabber due to fact that it is unusual. I like the blank space. It makes me tend to wait if the model will still walk towards the blank space.

Well done!

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• wynngd (473)
• [2008-02-22 7:30]

very Nice concept!

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• CAROL50 (4733)
• [2008-02-29 11:37]
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Hi Christian,
Stumbled by chance on your photo going from one photo to another and Gee ,can't help myself from commenting it.I do believe this is simply a terrific idea that could be elaborated further imo though .Frankly it has this unique and unusual approach not seen here on this site to my knowledge. My suggestion ,as another member said ,is to have a little more of the girl in the frame and perhaps see an arm visibly extended out down her side like to express 'motion' as if the girl has but just walked into the frame for exemple .The blank dark space in front of her is ideal in making the viewer imagine about her heading there , somewhere to remain 'incognito' you know that type of feeling ...By the way i also like the matching red in your name and on the girl's sumptuous lips,
TFS,
Carol