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Street Kids 2


Street Kids 2
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Copyright: Karen Arnold (dareco) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1154 W: 15 N: 597] (10356)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-23
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/3.5, 1/1000 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-04-12 12:04
Viewed: 401
Points: 26
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Another picture of one of these special little people.
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Hi Karen,
Beautiful portrait of this young kid in philippines, Nice pose and great colors excellent POV, and details, well done.
Michel

Hi Karen,
Very beautiful portrait of this child.Good pose.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAt,

This is the shot I was talking about. A lot of potential.

1. He is not looking at you. You might have snapped at the wrong time. Or maybe you still have a better pose there.
2. Notice the shadows? You could have tilted his head to have 1 part in light and the other in shadows.
3. Dont crop (in the frame) cutting fingers, or limb joints. Cut them after the joint.

For the posing. You can call their attention then snap. You still get a very good pose and candid shot. Try it.

Tell me after =)


TFS.

I like the photo,good light,nice colors
But it make me sat when I think that this kids have no place to stay...nothing to wear and not so much to eat.
Is unfair.
In mine hometown(bucharest) you can see a lot's of homeless too

Hi Karen,
Must have taken the photo after they had a swim judging from the hair which still looks damp.... good image quality. Nice capture ... I wish though he looked at the camera. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4190 W: 222 N: 3834] (28091)
  • [2008-04-13 0:56]

Hi Karen

Good sharpness & dof in this candid portrait of the Filipino boy. Wonderful colour & saturation, with good lighting contrasts. Tfs!

Beautifull portrait of this young man,
very nice colours and details, well done Karen!!

I think this one is better linked to the title than the previous one... Excellent portrait and pose. Love the colors and the light.
TFS, Karen
Best regards,
Diana
p.s. tomorrow

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  • Loup Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 97 W: 0 N: 57] (1116)
  • [2008-04-13 11:19]

Hi Karen,
Beautiful portrait of this child.
Details and colors perfect.
Thank for that.
Jasmine

So you really like my country huh Karen??
I thank you for that...
Congratulations for this!

Ollie DLC
Later ;)

Hi Karen, I am not fuused about the lack of eye contact. Good colour and skin tones and the harsh light overcome nicely. TFS,
David

Many thanks for your comment on ‘Tamar Tides VI’

Another good capture of the kids Karen I agree that it would have been nice to see less shadows in his face but on the other hand your photo depicts the natural shyness of the child too. His pose and body language tells it all.

TFS

Wia

Hi Karen..this is a nice shot...the pose works very well. The way the boy lays across the shot works very well for the composition.

Roger

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