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I took this when we had our 'informal' photo shoot at the cemetery with my friend, Marielle.. I was using my only camera that is plainly digital so I couldn't capture very well the expression on her face and even her right hand because I think the lens is not wide enough.
Adjusted the levels and curves then cropped the bottom portion and added a frame.
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good but not comfortable with the position of the subject
- wilth
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(1733) - [2008-05-11 8:32]
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I like the picture, and the expression conveyed by her face and body language.
Lighting is good and interesting too.
Nice work.
Unless it was something you were going for, in terms of body expression, it might have been even better with her being straight versus tilted, not a big deal, but just seems a bit off to me.
TFS, it's a fun image.
Wilt
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(12) - [2008-05-11 12:53]
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Hi, Cyren!
PERFECT SHARPNESS AND LIGHTS! Wonderful shot! :-))))))
j.
Your a descent photographer, but you need to adjust your attitude. Your not going to get anywhere by insulting people's photos.
You can critique without being a jerk.
-zebulus
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