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Copyright: Danilo Martinez (cunejo200) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2308 W: 60 N: 4262] (17723)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-04-04
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Nikon D300, Nikkor 18-200 1:3.5-5.6 ED DX
Exposure: f/9.0
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-07-14 3:59
Viewed: 311
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 79
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is an early morning scene at Manila's harbor. The rising sun was on my back, a silhouette of me snapping the photo can be seen at bottom left. The distinct color band or layer of the distant boats was enhanced by the use of an ND grad filter. Perhaps the city's air pollution helped define the band. Processing with Photoshop included auto level and contrast, then sizing. And I added some noise on the f/g to provide more texture (an experiment and I am not sure how it would be received).

CallMeMaria, Royaldevon, manujmehta, fransx, billyboy51, Teresat, kanton, chendis, Beger, suzy, lilimih33, tanburi, chrisJ, harpya, MLINES, mvdisco, Scharan2 has marked this note useful
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Hello Danilo,
Absolutely amazing view with such marvellous shades of blue, reflections, sharpness, POV and details. Very beautiful indeed!!
TFS
Regards,
Lurdes

Hi Danilo, today's neighbor,
Great shot my friend. Bravo for contibution from pollution. Very good composed, great contrast and matinal lighting,
Great one,
Regards,
Raimundo

Hi Danilo,
Very impressive panoramic view vith excellent POV, sharpness, colours and light.TFS.
Cheers,

hAyAti

hello Danilo
how are you friend?
wonderful shot
great view and lovely light
unique boats in the foreground
good sharpness and fine details
great depth

regards
Manuj Mehta

Hello Danilo,

Besides having captured the early morning 'blues' with lovely tones, you have composed this shot really well.
We get a feeling of distance over the water before we meet the anchored boats.
Lovely reflections!

There is a little pixelation in the f/g which could probably be removed with the blur tool.

Have a good day,
Bev :-)

Hi Danilo
Wonderful capture and POV
Great clarity and reflections
Burak

Hello, Danilo -
Really great composition with the horizontal band of background boats the old, long foreground boats coming in at a slight angle. You managed to produce sharpness at all depths. Nice warm colors. Well done.

Hi Danilo
wonderful image and composition
the seascpae is fantastic for light and sharp
and the diagonal boats add lot to the photo
ciao
Lucio

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  • ayse51 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1719 W: 124 N: 1479] (20826)
  • [2009-07-14 5:37]

Hi Danilo,
what a beautiful and peaceful place.Reflections and blue tones are so effective.Congratulations.Necla.

Hi Danilo,
A splendid soft seascape!
Nice reflections on the dead calm water.
Beautiful emersion of these four prows in the foreground, thus creating a deep DOF.
Glorious lighting and accurate sharpness.
A very clean presentation.
Best regards,

Francis Xavier

Hi Danilo, dominant in blue excellent work with excellent reflections ...looking in the bottom left there is a shadow reflection of you IMO I would probably have cropped this corner to remove ..but perhaps you intended it to be there
Regards
Bill

Hello dear Danilo,

What a wonderful seascape with marvelous blue tones!
Great light, contrast and sharpness!
Congratulations and TFS
Sergio

Boa tarde Dear Danilo
Wish I were the silhouette to share this amazing place. Very well composed and captured. Excellent lines the boats made. Wonderful composition.
Love it.
um abraço
Teresat

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  • nicou Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1352 W: 0 N: 2670] (21245)
  • [2009-07-14 6:15]

Hello,

quel bleu merveilleux, avec ces barques colorées tous ces bâteaux plus modernes en fond, grandioe image, vraiment de toute beauté.

Bravo et maitié

Nicou

Hello Danilo,
Amazing early morning lighting!
wonderful blue and reflections!
great pov and atmosphere!
Regards and tfs
Kostas

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  • jawa Gold Star Critiquer [C: 1372 W: 0 N: 1] (12003)
  • [2009-07-14 7:19]

Hi Danilo
In one word beautiful.
Gr Jos

DANILLO ny friend this is a terrific shot the colours and pov are very good colours are vidid realy nice shot tfs
regards bryan

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  • chendis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 527 W: 199 N: 779] (5403)
  • [2009-07-14 8:56]

Hi Danilo
amazing blue tones with grate POV and DOf
terrific details and sharpness with perfect light
i love the reflection in the water
Grate work friend!

Have grate time!
Oana

hi danilo, nice image, yes i see your shadow! wonderful sky graduation and good foreground interest, nice and sharp image with great colors too, very nice,
tfs,
scott

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  • Beger Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3315 W: 789 N: 4433] (19960)
  • [2009-07-14 9:05]

Hi Danilo,
What a beautiful photo!
The composition is priceless with the long boats in foreground which broke nicely the horizontality of the image. I like much the blue tones and beautiful diffused light in the horizon where the boats are reflecting. Nice to see your shade in the corner of the image, too!
Really, this is a splendid morning scene!
Bravo! Annie

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  • suzy Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 426 W: 38 N: 1263] (4340)
  • [2009-07-14 9:07]

amazing view, the soft gradient of blue water looks
so silky carrying the boats with a slight
reflection, charming ambiance, very neat, excellent
lighting and effective POV... I can see your shadow on the left:)splendid work as always..

best wishes dear Danilo
suzy

Wow, this is really great Danilo. Love the tone of blue in this shot ..
Great composition. The graininess you added certainly doesn't bother me .. it's subtle enough.
Really nice job Danilo
Trudy

Ciao Danilo, great view of wonderful harbour with a lot of boats, wonderful colors and splendid light, lovely composition, very well done, ciao Silvio

Great picture! but I would have deleted your shadow from the lower left corner before uploading.
All the best.
Fernando,

Hi Danilo,

Awesome dude! Makes me homesick.

Eleu

Hello Danilo!
Beautiful blue composition and peaceful atmosphere!
Great light, good sharpness!
I saw you shadow..... :)
Best regards!
Lili

Hello Danilo,
Wooowww. Like a dreamland....
A masterpiece, eye catching details, depthness, clarity and commposition...
No need any words
Selahattin E

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  • AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1053 W: 81 N: 66] (12629)
  • [2009-07-15 4:05]

dear Danilo,
various tone of blue on the water and in the sky is very impressive,
like a morning blue dream just before awaken...
long boats look the finger of walking sunny foot.
lined boats around the horizon make very calm air.
lighted and quiet view is peaceful in a morning atmosphere.
thank you for your excellent shot,
Akihisa

Hello Danilo.
Good view over the large habour with those canoes at the forground a good composition too.
Best regards from Jan

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  • chrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4263 W: 414 N: 6807] (42646)
  • [2009-07-16 5:43]

Hi Danilo

There's a little bit of noise in the lower right, but that's easily fixed in photoshop, by adding a little gaussian blur. Good sharpness, contrast & graphism. Tfs!

tama po kayo....same location dun lang naman po ako nag shoot ng boats. pero mas maganda shots nyo....very good blue gradients on the water

cris(",)

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 597 W: 0 N: 958] (4614)
  • [2009-07-17 5:54]

Hi Danilo,
superbs sharpness
superbs low angle giving a good style.Well presented in special shot with good and pleasant colours.
salute to you for attaining such a great shot.

regards,
Foozi

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  • subs Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 0 N: 222] (2080)
  • [2009-07-17 6:28]
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Hi Danilo,
I like the power blue theme. Was your silhouette accidental or intentional? Simple yet soothing composition.
Rgds
Subashini

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  • tribord Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 38 W: 26 N: 79] (362)
  • [2009-07-17 7:10]

Bonjour Danilo,

I wonder sometimes if people take time to read the notes that we write, as many here asked questions in their critiques that were already answered in your note... And they check it as useful.
I guess I do not need to write tons of lines about the composition, as it is all fine, yes, with your silhouette in it.
colors, bla bla, contrast bla bla, light bla bla...
Now, let'take a look at the details.
First I am amazed by the density of the air pollution (I can see the same thing daily in my suburban area near Tokyo) so close to the sea.
But it creates a good depth of field...
About adding some noise, I think it can work here, giving more texture as you say, but on the other hand, you lose some clarity, vital for water, as it now looks somehow muddy.

Nice PP work anyway.

Damien (points disabled)

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  • harpya Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5757 W: 198 N: 2577] (10106)
  • [2009-07-18 7:09]

Ciao Danilo


This is wonderful Danilo,
this place is real!
The colors of this place is fantastic, the light
elements in the marina and even your shadow
in water, leaving a beautiful sight!
Loved your horizon with all the boats together!
Congratulations my friend ..

Sergio

Hello Danilo! Wonderful boats, amazing sails, very good POV and capture. Excellent lightness and brightness. Perfect sharpness. Original work. Well done!

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  • psyce Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 180 W: 11 N: 105] (1770)
  • [2009-07-23 3:54]

Hi Dan... I have a similar photo of those dragon boats... but I guess yours is a lot better.... nice capture and POV.... and great pp too.... Regards

Hi Danilo, A fine composition with lots of interest in the foreground, a very good technique. The dynamics created by the diagonal works well. TFS. Murray.

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  • tracer Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 788 W: 45 N: 1588] (7924)
  • [2009-07-25 10:36]

you made sure you didn't missed this one. Cool blues bro Danilo.

regards

i a n

Hi Danilo,
Nice presentation of the Manila's harbor,
great colors and Point of view,
good contrast and light,
very well taken and done.
Michel

Olá Danilo

Belíssima fotografia...
Composição muito bonita, um cenário
espetacular. As cores estão suaves e
uma luz ótima.
Parabéns!
GA
Vera

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  • glint Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 620 W: 3 N: 531] (3606)
  • [2009-08-07 15:39]

hello Danilo,
this is a superb study in colour and composition. Your experiment with foreground noise gives this a painterly feel. delightful!
regards,
Bev

Hi Danilo!

The composition is superb inculding these old boats for a fg interest and the new ships in the bg. The additional noise works well. You caught well the peaceful atmophere of the morning. TFS!

Best regards,
Andor

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