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the_sailor
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Copyright: Nile Sidametova (Nile_123) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 9] (191)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-07-24
Categories: Humorous
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-08-12 3:57
Viewed: 938
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I passed on the river on the bank the Don was strong of fat. It saw this picture: this dog sits on the deck. To it it is hot, although water next in the bucket. And inscription on the table: &.tsuot;Ostorodno, evil dog! Sailor Boy&.tsuot;. But this dog is not completely similar to the evil dog, it is faster, to the unhappy.

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  • zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)
  • [2004-08-12 17:19]

It is a pretty good photo that is given more "power" by your note. Teh light was very harsh when you took it, casting some strong and intresting shadows. You did very well in not oversxposing the white area. That is easly done in those conditon. Your placement of the dow whitin the frame is nicely chose, it adds attention to him. I do wish however that the roof of the dog house was not cut off...

I like this shot for the simplicity of the colors around your subject. There is little to distract from the dog. I think a closer crop would be a little more effective on it - I did a workshop. See what you think, Nile.

oh i really love this picture ! and the dog is so adorable(but it looks so sad)
sarah

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