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the rain


the rain
Photo Information
Copyright: Nile Sidametova (Nile_123) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 26 W: 0 N: 9] (191)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-08-08
Categories: Decisive Moment
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-08-19 0:56
Viewed: 2463
Points: 21
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Women under the strong rain pass road.
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  • Great 
  • hojper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 687 W: 111 N: 847] (4087)
  • [2004-08-27 8:55]
  • [2]

This is a good every day shot. And you can actually see the rain falling. That is quite rare. Not a bad composition (with the red car racing out of the frame) but I would have cropped out the drainpipe on the right - it disturbs the perspective, and the subject.

Very good candit shot of the two women walking in the rain. The rain falling from the sky is nice and visible. Well done. The red car adds a nice splash of colour. I like it.

  • Great 
  • Neige Gold Star Critiquer [C: 610 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2004-09-08 9:21]
  • [2]

I would have like to see many shots of these two woman, only to watch where they were heading to :) Nice daily life situation again, simple, yet interesting. I like the wet shiny umbrellas.

  • Great 
  • Sasha Silver Star Critiquer [C: 21 W: 0 N: 1] (166)
  • [2004-09-16 0:09]
  • [2]

Lovely picture. Maybe cropping out the pipe and giving the ladies more space to move would help, but it's great as is too! Thanks.

Ваша камера создана для дождя!
Можно уже серию открывать :)

I love this shot, it is really alive!
Colors and figures are excellent, I would just crop the object to the right.
Congratulazioni!

Marco

  • Great 
  • Usaf Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 207 W: 78 N: 153] (1492)
  • [2006-06-14 11:24]

Long time I havent seen rain fall.

A nice shot under the circumstances. POV is not good. If they were placed in the left and space in front of them was making a good composition. A high shutter speed was required to make the picture more sharper which was not done. However thanks for sharing.

Superb shot where the daily movement is so well captured and beauty is preserved!

  • Great 
  • kaman7 (204)
  • [2008-02-05 14:26]

very good composition. so realistic.. well done

  • Great 
  • lavan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 695 W: 2 N: 126] (3446)
  • [2008-02-18 5:35]

nice capture
good moment

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