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Portrait in dark tones


Portrait in dark tones
Photo Information
Copyright: Marianna Veimann (veimann) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 2 N: 1] (130)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-05-21
Categories: Friends/Family, Mood
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5700
Exposure: f/3.0, 1/6 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2004-05-22 7:40
Viewed: 1772
Points: 29
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She is my friend, as, she in the previous photo. It is a photo it is made in cafe as you see, at natural illumination from a window. She has reflected, and I have taken advantage of this moment and have made a shot :)

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  • Great 
  • Mirza (0)
  • [2004-05-22 7:41]

это вообще крутой портрет, сравнивая с первым. правда. очень хорошо.

Nice picture. Your friend had stopped time (not the guy on the right). Your friend is illuminated by another ligth than other peoples in the cafe. Very good composition ! Good job !

  • Great 
  • hertz (608)
  • [2004-05-22 8:49]

Another nice portrait Marianna! The natural light on subject create nice soft tone...

Again a very nice portrait, Marianna, in which your friend makes a fine model in the relaxed café setting. The light really works great here, and the soft color tones are pleasant.

  • Great 
  • Quark Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 1339 W: 10 N: 29] (66)
  • [2004-05-22 9:11]

Again one of your friend !
She is dreaming and thinking......
I like this pose too, a nice one with a
very, very good light !
Superb !

Beautiful girl and cool shot

Nice shot, I like the angle shot, nice composition. Congratulations.

I like her position in diagonal, occupying all the frame in a landscape orientation. Very relaxed, yet almost studied composition.

  • Great 
  • Judy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 167 W: 94 N: 153] (529)
  • [2004-05-23 13:42]

Great lighting here Marianna, and a very relaxed pose too. I like the warm natural colours in this shot - don't think it would work in B&W, so glad you left the colours natural. Well done.

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  • Didi Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 51 W: 27 N: 37] (207)
  • [2004-05-23 15:33]

Waw ! she's waiting for a mysterious contact, it's like a moovie scene. The shot is very good, very beautiful expression like we say in french "Beau regard ".
I'am charmed

Very nice portait ... but that woman in the right background and the arm in the left background are very distractive ... try some "Photoshop magic" to delete it and voilá, you´ll get a great portrait.

Hi Marianna! Welcome to TL! Nice shot of your friend here, she looked like if she's thinking a lot or maybe whaiting for a call from that cell on the table or just dreaming. The light was from the window only, I hope you won't mind, but to get an other version, I made a W.S. on it to add a little more light to see more details of your friend...Gaétan

  • Great 
  • cxxl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 135 W: 11 N: 73] (1335)
  • [2004-05-27 6:43]

Looks like your friend is enjoying her wine Marianna ;) Nice mood and I like the composition. I like the added sunglasses and mobile phone in the shot, and the "spent" coffee cup. Good one.

  • Great 
  • paroy (118)
  • [2004-06-07 23:13]

Great to see on TL . Very nice shot , good composition ,contrast and very sharp photo.
Bravo!

Very nice compo Marianna! Her standing makes a lovely portrait..love all the "cafe" elements playing together here :)

Haces unos retratos muy buenos
enhorabuena

saludos

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