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Freedom 2


Freedom 2
Photo Information
Copyright: Firdaus Muhammad (Fid) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 36 W: 0 N: 16] (202)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-04-06
Categories: Decisive Moment, Friends/Family, Experimental
Camera: Panasonic DMC FZ8
Exposure: f/7.1, 1/400 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-01 19:28
Viewed: 650
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Hi TL members!

Here is the pic to those who wanted to look at the pic w/o the crumpled paper effect.

Hope you like it!
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  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 182 W: 4 N: 60] (555)
  • [2008-05-01 19:48]

It's not a bad image, with a pleasant foreground and the welcome inclusion of the stretching woman. However, it seems a bit flat, failing to convey the depth of the landscape. I think that placing the horizon in the dead middle of the image was not a good idea. I also think that the woman is a bit to close to the camera.

Very appealing and very sensual, in spite of the aforementioned flaws.
Serge

Hello

nice composition, tfs

Olivier

Yep, I like it. Gorgeous colours, the beautiful colour of your model's skin against the beautiful hues of sky, water and sand. I love the free movement of her dress in the breeze, it really does match your title.
I like the placement of the woman and I really don't think the position of horizon is a problem here, it's all nicely composed to me.
Rew

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