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Girl on Beach


Girl on Beach
Photo Information
Copyright: Mike Wong (TheUnknown) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 30 W: 7 N: 5] (218)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-09-02
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Canon EOS350D/Digital Rebel XT, Tamron SP AF17-50mm F/2.8 XR Di II
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/800 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-09-03 15:14
Viewed: 4114
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 30
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Girl on the beach.
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  • shal Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 165 W: 46 N: 161] (1304)
  • [2006-09-03 15:21]

Hey Mike,
Welcome to TL,
The beach fun never looses its charm,
and a good way of showing it Mike :)
Good natural lighting and composition, would have liked to see a wider angle of view
Cheers

Welcome to TL. Excellent lighting here, giving really smooth tones. Interesting choice of composition - why not show all of your model?
Thanks for sharing
Mark

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  • shahx Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 88 W: 34 N: 58] (656)
  • [2006-09-03 15:58]

very good lighting and clarity.
Slight DOF.
Welcome to TL,
Regards,
Shahid

Wonderful view ;)

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  • Enric Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 55 N: 526] (5870)
  • [2006-09-03 18:44]

I like this image a lot, but i am not sure why...

Enric.

I like the shot. Leaves a little mystery on who the person is to us, the viewers. You chose to not show the whole person, and is your right. You are the artist of this show and it's ok to deceide what that post will be on the site. Nice going. (^_^)

wooww... =) no need for too much words..

its very well picture
girl and beach are wonderful view - always
regards
Michal

Hi Mike
Nice composition!Colors are great and model...huh! :) Very good sharpness and lightning.Not bad!!

nick

Ooo la la! Nice shot!
B-)
Linda

Hello Mike,
An excellent composition, all object are in the right place. Colours, lines and curves, they are beautiful.
Beautiful job
Hernán

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  • wck Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 757 W: 37 N: 423] (3843)
  • [2006-10-27 1:47]

Hi M.Wong, Beautiful shot! Wonderful line work!

Wong

There is a beach in this photo???

Excellent DOF, and the skin tone and color are perfect. both of this series is amazing good work tfs-jon

Should be a nice destination pretty soon. How is it there in January or February?

Well done! Just the little touch of mystery needed.

TFS

Marc

If the model was aware of the shot, then I would have suggested moving the strap on her back to a more centered position. I also would have taken a wider angle. Great lighting however, and in general a nice shot. Your models body is obviously very attractive, which is pleasant to look at anyway so....lol TFS!!!!

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