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• tournesol (12862)
• [2006-09-04 9:01]

Very nice composition! You made good use of the yellow marking on the street. And the addition of the moving car adds dynamism to the picture. A well thought out picture!

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• chrisJ (42097)
• [2006-09-04 9:07]

Hi BK

I like the yellow

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• lenore82 (678)
• [2006-09-04 11:14]

Hi Xu, nice composition here. It shows well the contrast which can been seen in Singapore. There is an interesting stillness in this image itself contrasted by the moving car. I think the pic is a bit dark but it might be my screen. Anyway, good work :)
Ciao, Annick

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• Emma (10151)
• [2006-09-04 11:48]

Very good composition and perspective of the photo.Excellent effect.
Greetings.
Eva

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• chiping59 (3448)
• [2006-09-04 12:29]

The yelloe lines give good perspective!The blurry moving car is very interesting.Good urban shot!

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• cunejo200 (17291)
• [2006-09-04 18:25]

A composition of contrast indeed. Very lovely Xu. Cheers Danilo

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• napdsp (622)
• [2006-09-05 1:08]

Your composition is just impeccable in all your photos and this one is no exception. The yellow line is just great in a almost b&w background. Long exposure is a good idea. TFS.

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• uranium (878)
• [2006-09-05 4:57]

Hi dear BK,

Nice work,
nice cropponig,
Ang good naming,

many thx for kind words for my works,

Ali...

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• shahx (656)
• [2006-09-05 7:59]

I love the perspective and colors.
that yellow arror cought my eyes.
Shahid

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• sleeplessjojo (1167)
• [2006-09-05 10:08]

Hi Xu,
Indeed, what a contrast. I like the sharp yellow lines on the floor and the light. Very interesting composition with an excellent angle.
TFS,
Hager

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• SkyF (6138)
• [2006-09-05 10:33]

Hi BK,
excellent composition packed with great elements. Love the motion blur which represents the dynamic. Another great element is the yellow line whcih for me represents the boldness. All that and the great architechtural details makes it a very interesting composition to look at.
TFS..Sky

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• joebatista (5412)
• [2006-09-05 11:18]

Wonderful shot BK

I love the way the yellow stands out and the effects of the moving car is excellent.
I love it.

Thanks for sharing my friend

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• lollie (62)
• [2006-09-05 13:30]

Very nice composition BK, very good use of blur, bravo.


I going to make a break with TL and I would like to thank you for your support.
So long.

Steph.

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• Karey (775)
• [2006-09-06 5:54]

Great feeling of movement, and the 3rd dimension added with the colourful graphic in front and the composition of the building in the background. cheers, Karey

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• kokos101 (27614)
• [2006-09-06 13:09]

hello my friend!
beautiful photo with excellent efect.
i like it.
TFS
zoran

points tomorrow

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• JohnTulip (35290)
• [2006-09-06 13:11]

My teaching master from my first steps in TL: Again a new fantastic compo..is all this inside your camera? NOO! It all is constructed between your ears and it amazes us time after time! Special and very insirering again KXOH! TFS
John T

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• logios (1864)
• [2006-09-07 11:23]

Hi BK,
Very good perspective. I like the yellow line and the complex "old-new". Good idea to use low shutter speed.
Best regards
Ioannis

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• SunToucher (6917)
• [2006-09-08 3:06]

Hi BK,
Great contrast between the old and new. Great POV with the yellow marking as a great lead in line. I love the use of the shutter speed to get car as a less dominant subject in the photo.
TFS,
Niek

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• Photograph2u (0)
• [2006-09-09 12:55]

Hi Xu, I love the mood here created by the low light, and the movement blur in this nice composition on Old and New.

Well seen and well done! Take care, Yan :)
p.s. Many thx for your crit on "Beach Grass at Dusk". It really is appreciated.

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• SylFondacci (14125)
• [2006-09-09 12:59]

Hi Bk,
I obviously like the urban shot but I find the compo is a bit unbalanced. What is very interesting is the sign and the motion blur created by the passing car. The rest of the compo, the buiding seems to have nothing to do with the lower half part of the image and then the billboard (?) on top of the building is too much. I would have tried a horizontal compo, no matter if you had cut the building.
Sylvie

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• iso (27913)
• [2006-09-11 7:58]

Real nice compo, nice tecnic, origibal & well done.

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• clapi73 (705)
• [2006-09-20 12:00]

Hi Bk,

Really a great idea: architectonics contrast, motion and static contrast, tonal contrast.!!! I like it very much.

TFS

cla

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• sebcz (869)
• [2006-09-25 11:01]

Hi!
Very nice composition with dramatic foreground, while the title subjects remaind behind, being still.
Good work!
Seb