CoffeeBreak

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• Suerte (3144)
• [2006-10-30 5:37]
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interesting work, good idea, but i would have cropped it on the right side.good frame!

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• peetol (5743)
• [2006-11-02 4:41]
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The exposure is very good, but, in my opinion, the subject is not very interesting. You may want to try finding colorful decorations and make it as your subject. The lighting on this one is very good, though. And the clean background matches the subject. These are foundations for a good composition, but, again the subject must have that feel, or mood, that translates to the viewer. :)

Just my two cents, hope you don't mind again. :)

Regards,

Pierre

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• wenqing (11857)
• [2006-11-05 8:15]
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very good sharpness and details here albert :)
framing and composition looks good too :) just keep going in this direction
nice work :)

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• SylFondacci (14127)
• [2006-11-05 15:09]
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Nice composition and good sharpness, Albert ! And I love coffee :) even if here we only have the cups, no coffee break without coffe ;)
I would have preferred no crop at all as for me. But only a personal opinion.
Have a nice evening !
Sylvie

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• hay_kes (57038)
• [2006-11-05 18:36]
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Hi Albert,
Very nice still life study..Excellent sharp, details and compo.TFS.

hAyAti

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• anducina (8229)
• [2006-11-06 18:30]
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Nice compo and framing. The beauty of simple things. Nice cups, pleasant colours.
TFS,

Andreea

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• atarisphoto (960)
• [2006-11-06 22:08]
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although i dont mind the off center crop i think a more balanced shot might have worked better for this one...maybe a slight counter clockwise rotation on this photo though to level it out...nice still life study...but it needs a little something more to make it really stand out (maybe some scattered expresso beans)...just some thoughts...peace***