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Potrait: Shanice


Potrait: Shanice
Photo Information
Copyright: Audrey Lene Lee (audlenelee) (69)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-01-30
Categories: Friends/Family, Experimental, Portrait
Camera: Sony Ericsson K800i
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/20 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-02-12 4:27
Viewed: 885
Points: 1
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She wanted me to take a picture of her, and so I did. With my mobile no less.

Then I decided to experiment with the Lomo script I found for Photoshop on FlickR. Not very sure what the script does exactly though. :P

No other editing done.

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Hi Audrey
To be honest it doesn't work too well ... it's good that you've experimented though, because experiments can show us both success, and its lack. :)
POV is probably too close, Shanice is no doubt pretty but this distorted view doesn't show it. There is a yellowish light on her face, compared to the natural-light background (which is distractingly busy in itself.)
Take this shot from a little further back. Make sure the light is consistent - all artificial, or all natural - and that your background is neutral and uncluttered. The large aperture of the cellphone camera should create a nice shallow depth of field, and any noise or pixellation can be taken care of in PhotoShop. :)
Good luck, I'm keen to see another attempt at this!
Rew

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