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Splashed!
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Copyright: richard james (Kilted-Arab) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1007 W: 105 N: 2089] (8803)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-04-06
Categories: Daily Life, Friends/Family
Camera: Canon 5D, Canon 70-200 f/4 USM L, Hoya 77mm UV
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/2500 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): Adorable Kids 2, The Weans... [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-04-06 3:18
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[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Taken in the same location as this shot of Jessica and this one of Hannah.

We've been here a few times with the kids - they love running around in the water and lunching here afterwards.

We've loads of colourful, frozen water shots - so tried something a bit different for this posting. Does the b/w conversion and the crop work here? It appeals to me but maybe because I've seen so many of the colourful ones :-)


ISO 200, f2.8, 1/2500

Shot in RAW, cropped, converted to b/w, white balance adjusted, resized, sharpened.

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WOW Richard!
Very cute picture!
The choice of great iso and fast speed looks great!
TFS

Hi Richard,

Great shot! Very animated. The B&W is a good choisse and because of the POV the crop fits well. Nice sharp details.
Well done!

TFS Greetings Simone

Hi Richard,
Beautiful,B%W,good splash photo,very sharp,ggod contrast.
Regards,
Ralf

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  • Janice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3196 W: 225 N: 6898] (27347)
  • [2008-04-06 3:47]

I thought this must be your photo before I even saw your name Richard. I remember seeing Hannah's photo in the wet pond.

Super action shots - all 3 of them. They were having so much fun, and especially in that Singapore heat.

I always prefer colour, but I just love this cheeky look here. It's just brilliant

Janice

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  • Jens Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 661 W: 55 N: 1216] (4625)
  • [2008-04-06 3:50]

Hi Richard
Great action shot from your hand. Superb details, excellent light, good focus, and a brilliant sharpness, well composed - shortly sayed Great job.
Greetings
Jens.

Hi Richard

Great capture and expression...well done!! Love the b/w and the water frozen in the air looks great!

TFS

Tracey

great capture of a wonderfull expression
Moni

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  • Jong Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 412 W: 0 N: 245] (2644)
  • [2008-04-06 4:10]

that place is always full of children's laugh and fun, can feel the joyful each time been there. no diffrence with your kid, love that expression and splashing of water. very well done, Richard

Hi Richard,
Great action shot of the little maid, the B&W works well and I like the composition, the f2.8 has given a great DOF, with such a great little model how could you go wrong, her expression is priceless.
Well done
Regards Andy

Its a marvelous photo. Right angle, good splash, very sharp. nicely focused

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  • WMcK Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 734 W: 8 N: 1671] (6444)
  • [2008-04-06 4:52]

Yay! A perfect combination, Richard. The black and white I love, and the lovley wee girl. The expression on her face is just so precious. The water motion stopped is very impressive in the black and white. Brilliant composition. I would be hard pressed to choose any one of the series over another.
Warm Regards

Really excellent Richard! I love the bit of light at her feet. The line of water leads the eye down and over to the right! Nice stop action on the drops! Some are just frozen in air! No easy to do this on automatic! That poor lazer would hit all sorts of weird spots! You have her super sharp!
***Has she graduated high school yet?? Man she looks older everytime I see her!!
B-)
Linda

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1154 W: 15 N: 597] (10356)
  • [2008-04-06 6:19]

Another very sweet capture of your little princess!! I do like the b&w. TFS

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  • Dot Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 860 W: 0 N: 1388] (5630)
  • [2008-04-06 6:35]

Hi Richard
I'll bet you are having as much fun while snappin away as the kids do. Once again you show us how its done. Converting to mono also a good idea as a shot like this could have been taken several years ago. Nice work
Dot

Hello Richard,
This really beautiful BW shot.
Full of expressions, fun and happiness.
Technically perfect. TFS
Vandana

Hi Richard,

You certainly have taken some magnificent photos of your girls in the fountains. I love all of them. I think the black and white works great! I like the fact that black and white brings more focus on the water itself (in my opinion anyway) as there are no color distractions in the background. Her expression is just priceless.

Great shot! Lisa

Hi Richard..perfect capture..wonderful model and pose. Great details.

Roger

Hi Richard,

It's amazing! Very good details. The light and composition is perfect. Great shot!

Regards,
Masroor

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  • Loup Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 97 W: 0 N: 57] (1116)
  • [2008-04-06 9:03]

Hello Richard,
Wow!
Lovely expression and great action shot.
Fun and hapiness of this lovely girl is beautiful.
I love it.
Thank
Jasmine

Hi Richard,

you not only have cute 'model' but also the RIGHT model for this kind of shot...kids love to play with water.

very adorable & lovely expression & mood. great pov & dof and the frozen water is just beautiful.

TFS
Regards
Agoes

Hi Richard,
I love this picture! It's so natural!
Very well done and TFS!
Greetings Vivianne

Hola Richard.
Genial momento. Buenos detalles en blanco y negro.
Un saludo,JL.

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  • Arox Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 83 W: 11 N: 48] (754)
  • [2008-04-06 13:50]

Hi Richard

Great shot! Her face said everything- She is happy:)
Great composition and freeze frame. I like it very much.

Greetings
Arox

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  • Tomek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1199 W: 38 N: 2058] (11858)
  • [2008-04-06 13:59]

Great picture in action - very natural and technically so good:)
Tom

Great photo: Admirable shot.

My regards

tersat

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  • pozaru Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3348 W: 688 N: 1921] (16125)
  • [2008-04-06 23:15]

This is a great capture; congrats !
Joyful memory.


best regards,
v

it rememembers me something.. yes.. Hannah Banana a shot that i have loved!! nice the pov and the scene.. lovely expression.. and perfect choise the b&w!! excellent post! thanks
ciao Marco
;) soon

Hi Richard,
Oooooo... another lovely shot of your beautiful daughter in her great moment of joy. Her expression tells it nicely. The WOW thing is that frozen splash!! It had given a great impact to this nice black & white shot. A yes to me - the B&W tone worked well for this expression, though a colored version might presents the cheerful moment.
TFS
Ramdan.
:) :)

Hi Richard,

Excellent shot! I like very much the girl's expression, a great moment you capture, very well composed. TFS
Sorina

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  • A-lex Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 117 W: 52 N: 244] (2000)
  • [2008-04-07 11:02]

Hi Richard,

This is so lovely.
What a beautiful girl and a great shot!
B&W is perfect!

Alex

What can I say, it's another great capture. The little details like slight OE on her shoulders (on this monitor, at least) are thoroughly forgivable because of the delightful expression you caught here. The composition just shows that you know what you're doing through and through with this stuff.
Nice job!
Rew

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  • c_rapp Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1025 W: 17 N: 1190] (6624)
  • [2008-04-07 18:25]

I love the b/w makes you pay attention to details and the fun expressions. great details and absolutely adorable pov. She definately looks like she's having fun. TFs
Christan

Hi Richard,

Excellent exposure to stop those water . .
Great idea of setting up this image composition . .
Sharp and lovely kid's expression . .

Tfs,
Tjutjut

Hiya Richard

Absoflipinlutely superb! fantastic detail. well balanced shot, razor sharp and just oozing with your little ones character as she looks cheekily straight into the lens. Well chosen B/W too. An all round top shot here my friend. Love it.

TFS regards Helen

Hi Richard, lovely B&W composition, nice action of cute child with splendid expression, very well done, ciao Silvio

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  • jackal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 135 W: 1 N: 89] (1367)
  • [2008-04-08 14:27]

Jessica's expression is magic - great capture
Jack

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  • Silke Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3366 W: 284 N: 6438] (23896)
  • [2008-04-08 16:21]

This is just priceless, Richard!
The moment is perfectly caught. The B&W allows us to concentrate on her mood and the water that brought it about. Very fine work indeed
TFs
silke

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  • Mite Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 122 W: 0 N: 62] (506)
  • [2008-04-09 10:37]

Hi Richard
Kids really are the best models. We can tell she is having such a good time. Excellent capture of the water jet and overall composition. Perfect for B&W
TFS
Michel

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  • mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 290 W: 6 N: 532] (3339)
  • [2008-04-10 22:04]

sure, the black and white works, and so does the crop :) but there is a little less light on her face than i'd like :)

very good overall :)

muhammad muhsin

Hi Richard:
I have missed your outstandig actio-packed splash thriller series:)
super exposures that I see here!
Super details, composition not to mention the pretty little girl having so much of fun:)
Lovely & beautiful!
David

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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2014 W: 136 N: 3063] (16571)
  • [2008-04-13 0:26]

Oh I love here expression, she is so cute! you captured her very well, even with black and white, I still "can" hear her laughter... (in my head that is... I thought I did! :P ) excellent clarity, sharpness and dof. I like how everything is frozen "in time" it will be a great photos series she can look back when she grow up... :D Lovely shot...


Have a great weekend,

Cheers,
Sweety
:) ltr

Hi Richard,

Sorry I have not been critiqueing recently but I have been busy.

I love this shot the pose is amazing it sums up the excitement of childhood.

Cheers
Tom

Hi Richard,

Very great shot!! Beautiful B&W, natural and pretty expression. Good contrast.
greetings

Laurence

Hi Richard,
Correct me if I'm wrong! Did you focus on water not on child's face? In your opinion should the face have a little greater brightness. Now I pay attention on water. But beside of it - very nice and I like it. :)

I just LOVE IT.....

My best regards to you .
Fer

Hermosa fotografia, momento bien capturado, expresion del sujeto y composicion. Felicidades y TFS. Saludos :)

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