Mayday! Mayday!

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Mayday! Mayday!
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Copyright: Janice Dunn (Janice) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3023 W: 202 N: 6229] (24755)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 1999-07-20
Categories: Humorous
Camera: Pentax ESPIO 160
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): TL's Comic Book stories - volume 1 [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2005-05-07 6:48
Viewed: 1042
Points: 12
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Mayday! Mayday!

I’m not sure what we’re supposed to do right now. But KK’s is having a lot of trouble getting anywhere. This keen, brave person from Down Under is slightly confused with his/her Easts and Wests, as well as the Norths and Souths. And who’s really in charge? Ming or Raven or even Walters and that Inspector Godin! What about the Tattooed lady? She’s not as innocent as she pretends.

MAYDAY! MAYDAY!
That Walters thinks he’s stopped KK from leaving Singapore,
but he’s not gonna win!
KK’s on the next boat out with the secret codes from Walters’ pockets.
And the key too. But is it the same key?
Why is Ming’s name on the notepad? Is he for real?
So Raven knew more than anyone expected.
But has Ming double-crossed him?
Why is the boat listing to one side – badly!
May Day! May Day!


PP Filters: Emboss Subtle and Poster edge (twice)
Font – COMIX size 14 / Bold

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To jmdaoudal: Thanks Jean MichelJanice 2 06-29 03:54
To Dingo: NorthJanice 1 05-13 19:11
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  • puffy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2007 W: 133 N: 2946] (16054)
  • [2005-05-07 7:29]

Hahahaha, Kool PP work Janice, this one look like real comic book! I like it, and the fonts as well, what is it call? It match the whole shot very well! Thanks for sharing. :)

Sounds like Kiwi is still having trouble getting over to Belgium. Love your new entry to the comic book.

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  • Dingo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3214 W: 364 N: 2555] (11099)
  • [2005-05-12 16:19]
  • [+]

Excellent PP work for the theme, Janice, but plotwise I'd say: mmmmm... For instance, how does KK get secret codes from Walters' pockets, while KK is in Singapore and Walters in Antwerp ? Still, you're weaving KK nicely into the story, so I wonder where he's gonna end up next. The bottom of the sea ? TFS.

Nice idea and some interesting PP work, looks really like a comic.
cheers
Joško

éh éh a very good styled comic style for your participation at the nice game Dingo and walterito organised :)))
Good work
I like it
Jean Michel

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  • Janone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3110 W: 62 N: 2157] (15852)
  • [2007-02-24 7:37]

Hello again, Janice.
Nice pcture taken of Lovely Sentosa.
Sentosa is one of the places, I like to go back for to Singapore.
Really lovely place.
In 1996, I was in Singapore for 5 months, but did only video that days.
Hope you will show a few more photo's?
Jan

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