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Magali


Magali
Photo Information
Copyright: Jerome Kim (jekir79) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 44 W: 2 N: 3] (62)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-02
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 400D
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-12-04 21:30
Viewed: 426
Points: 9
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Second studio session with new model Magali.

We had a few challenges on this shoot as we only had one 1000Kw flash, which was way too powerful. So, we directed it to the ceiling and played with reflecting panels to have a decent set-up. And with no light meter, this took us a while to figure out ;P

Any comments welcome ^^
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To fotofrancis: thanks again...jekir79 1 12-05 23:35
To gavindya: Hi Haldianjekir79 1 12-05 23:18
To Roly: thanks roly...jekir79 1 12-05 05:34
To darwinr: cheers Darwin...jekir79 1 12-05 02:02
To cknara: thank you Nara...jekir79 1 12-04 22:25
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Perfect sharpness,lighting and contrast.
Model's pose is also very good.

Thanks
Nara

it's not to bad
good lighting technique
try different angle of the model and different BG

im commenting on work as if I am a very good photographer :)
i am not... it just what I think.

TFS

  • Great 
  • Roly Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 160 W: 4 N: 38] (447)
  • [2007-12-05 5:15]
  • [+]

Not too bad, you captured a interesting expression on your model's face and the lighting is rather good. I do find the image a bit off-balance though, with too much empty space on the right. Maybe a vertical hot would have worked better for this image.

wonderful portrait with nice lighting,
great saturate colors here, and also focus and detail on her face.
the problem is... her hair its blended with her dress.
good luck and TFS
Haldian

Love this expression. Very alive and beautiful. :) Nice contrast and good composition I think you got the lighting just right. :)

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