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The Flute player


The Flute player
Photo Information
Copyright: Masroor Sheidaei (Masroor) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 121 W: 13 N: 36] (338)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-09
Categories: Event
Camera: Canon EOS400D, Canon EFS 18-55 mm
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/30 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Music [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-17 5:32
Viewed: 242
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
We are in front of restaurant of the Ritz-Carlton hotel in Seoul. Very lovely place with lots of dimmed lights. There are three girls playing musical instruments and singing which fill the atmosphere with lovely sounds. One play Piano, this one plays the Flute and the last one singing. Unfortunately the lights were too low to take good shots, however the players should move to play and sing. The flash was not a good choice to take the shots. Anyway here is the result with some PP work. I hope you like it.
Your critiques will be highly appreciated.
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To ele_eng: Thanks!Masroor 1 05-19 21:10
To rewshearer: Thanks!Masroor 1 05-18 02:09
To harpya: Thanks!Masroor 1 05-18 02:05
To mesquens1: Thanks!Masroor 1 05-18 02:03
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Hi Masroor,
Interesting portrait shot a beuatiful girl. Really the light is poor, but you can ameliorate with a good editor of images like Photoshop, Photofiltre, Photopaint, etc.
See the WS tha I send to you.
TFS
Raimundo

Hello Masroor


I like this visual one, I like simplicity
of the picture, I can see that the flautist this in
I move with your arms playing the flute.
I like shadows of Bg is natural.
Sells our friend's WS, but I prefer the original version!
Congratulations my friend...

Sérgio

Hi Masroor
This is a nice capture overall. Good choice to move the ISO up to 800 but I can see what you mean by the light being poor. A little more boost in PP, particularly in gamma to lift soome of those shadows, would help here.
Be careful of little details - like the cropped fingers on the left side of the shot, a good photographer should automatically seek to keep those in frame.
Rew

Hi MAsroor
Nice shot, good focus and soft skin, very good light control (the price of 18-55 Is here is 120000 Tooman) Take care.
Regards, Alireza

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