Magali_02

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• rminkow (7057)
• [2007-12-05 19:39]
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Hi Jerome...your clarity and lighting is very well done..For me the forward leaning pose is a little uncomfortable but I like composition.

Roger

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• fotofrancis (1332)
• [2007-12-05 22:54]
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Very pretty model. Nice clarity of shot. I would crop a bit more, I will do a workshop... am so happy to get the chance to do one after so long away from here... :))

I love the contrast of the black top with the background wall, and the crop I am thinking of will help enhance this by taking away the non-contrasting dress. Plus leaving her more out into the composition without a relationship to the way she is standing... See if I capture that at all... :D ;)

Kind regards to you and your model
Francis

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• rewshearer (16079)
• [2007-12-06 1:07]
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Nice portrait, I love the pose and her expression, and I like the effect of your tilt. She's a natural model and did a great job! Your tones, details, and sharpness are excellent.

A couple of elements that don't quite convince me here: I think a boost in contrast and a lift in blues would make a difference to this. I'm also not sure why you chose to leave in that glimpse of a wall-corner in the upper right, it doesn't really enhance the shot.

Nice work, keep them coming!
Rew

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• jefvonberg (308)
• [2007-12-06 8:34]
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Beautiful!!!! Great composition and soft colors. I like this one!

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• tgomes (244)
• [2007-12-06 15:52]
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Hello Jerome,
Excellent portrait and a beautiful model.
My compliments.
Tania

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• Regiomontana (2305)
• [2007-12-06 22:42]
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I like this photo much more than Magali_03, because in this one, her face expression, her pose, in my opinion, are better, and in this one there are not light/white spots of deodorant on her blouse. Great colors and sharpeness. TFS

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• guinness_fr (3184)
• [2007-12-07 0:04]
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salut jerome

effectivement je preferes celle la pour la pose, par contre, c'est dommage pour le coin en haut a droite

mais bon la aussi une bonne maitrise de la lumiere

bonne journée

Olivier