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Magali_03


Magali_03
Photo Information
Copyright: Jerome Kim (jekir79) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 44 W: 2 N: 3] (62)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-12-02
Categories: Portrait
Camera: Canon 400D
Details: (Fill) Flash: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2007-12-06 20:12
Viewed: 532
Points: 13
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
It's the last pic from the shoot I am going to upload. Don't want to overload the site with too many of the same photographs but it's the one prefer (personal opinion, of course)...

Based on Rew's comments, I tried to go a little bolder on the contrast and bringing warmer tones but I may still be too 'shy'.

Have a good day, J.
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ThreadThread Starter Messages Updated
To mell: hello Melljekir79 1 12-11 19:50
To hcvvmk: hey Hongjekir79 1 12-11 19:48
To SylvainMichel: merci sylvain...jekir79 1 12-11 19:45
To jefvonberg: hi jefjekir79 1 12-11 19:43
To japiey: cheers Jean Pauljekir79 1 12-07 00:40
To AndroK: thanks Andro...jekir79 1 12-06 23:40
To guinness_fr: merci olivier...jekir79 1 12-06 23:37
To hamperium: thank you Marcojekir79 1 12-06 21:53
To rewshearer: thanks again...jekir79 1 12-06 21:49
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Hi Jerome
Again - compliments to your model and a step in the right direction with the tones etc. although I think it could go further still.

I've tried a couple of workshops - one altering the levels and converting to black-and-white, the other playing with the colour balance.

Again, the sharpness and the textures are spot-on, very nice indeed.

My only other comment would be about the pose - great work with the top, but the angle of her head doesn't quite work, it's tilted a little too far back and looks slightly awkward.

Keep your shots coming
Rew

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  • AndroK Gold Star Critiquer [C: 998 W: 8 N: 0] (7235)
  • [2007-12-06 22:22]
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Hi
Beautiful portrait...
Nice composition and colors...
Greetings from Montenegro...

Hello jerome

really nice light. but the pose of the model is strange, I don't like her head pose in particular.

the same with another pose ?

TFS anyway

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  • japiey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1324 W: 103 N: 2310] (8724)
  • [2007-12-07 0:19]
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Hi Jerome,

Good pose and fine shot...
A different style...
Congrats, for both..model and you...

jean paul

good pose and clean shot
think it can be a little bit sharper but good focus on her eyes

Really great shot. I like the pose, the colors (again) and te model (again).

Bonjour Jerome
Très bonne composition avec les obliques du visage, des épaules et du vêtement. cette photo a beaucoup de mouvement


Amicalement
Sylvain

Hie Jerome,

Nice try there with the lady. She got the gaze and photogenic look for your photo. Nice setting and clothes too.

TFS,
Hong

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  • mell Silver Star Critiquer [C: 24 W: 2 N: 4] (435)
  • [2007-12-10 3:09]
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Hello Jerome,

Beautiful girl and very good portrait.
Compliments.
Mell

Me gustó la cadena de fotos!, y esta es la que ams me gustó de las tres.!
Felicitaciones!

Mauro

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