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Just Married


Just Married
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Copyright: Aamer Atozai (kheshkiwaal) Silver Note Writer [C: 7 W: 2 N: 27] (495)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2009-01-30
Categories: Event
Exposure: f/4, 1/125 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2009-05-24 23:34
Viewed: 215
Points: 0
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I was just there to be on the beach, while getting back to my place, I saw this just married couple posing for their official photographer. I just wanted to keep the memory of a Sri Lankan wedding with me and to share it with you all as well afterwards.

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Hi Aamer

This really doesn't look good in my opinion.

The couple is very centred in the frame (it is usually better to place subjects away from the centre of the photograph.)

We can only see the back of the groom's head and the bride doesn't look at all happy. Her wedding dress is overexposed on the left.

The background is also poorly considered - the statue in the pond has its head cropped by your frame and there is an orphaned umbrella or awning on the left intruding into the shot halfway up the frame.

Perhaps if you spend more time making critiques of others' photographs you will learn what makes a good shot, and it will help improve your own skill.

regards
Rew

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