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Copyright: Manuel Librodo (manny) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 525 W: 24 N: 1485] (11941)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-08-28
Categories: Friends/Family
Camera: Nikon D70
Exposure: f/5.0, 1/40 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-06-04 12:05
Viewed: 1431
Favorites: 3 [view]
Points: 22
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
an acted shots...Pupae and Kik. This is a BW conversion of an old shot. Just hoping for your feedback to determine whether I'll include this in my exhibit in Makati, Philippines.
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  • pompey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 406 W: 156 N: 601] (8415)
  • [2006-06-04 13:14]

Great work Manuel, I consider this the hardest form of photography (portraiture).
I am hopeless at it, but can spot a good portrait when I see one.
Well composed and with a good natural feel to it.
Thanks for sharing.
Regards.
Michael.

Beautiful picture :)

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  • nsrq Gold Star Critiquer [C: 171 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-06-04 14:45]

Hi Manny
This is a great portrait. In my opinion you should include it, although your other portraits are equally fantastic. I specially like the girl from the right, whose face is onlypartly visible.
Good luck with your exhibit.
Nilton

Great pair, I really like the placement you used, well done.

bardzo mi sie podoba.Bardzo dobre

Very interesting Manuel. I would say this shot will be a success in your exhibition. good luck :)

What to say...fantastic!!!

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  • erdna Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 629 W: 68 N: 746] (5423)
  • [2006-06-05 10:16]
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Very nice photo! You have an array of models Manny. Every school year a couple comes out for you. Lucky man! Please say your exhibit in Makati is in January 2007 as I want to see it. I usually go home in January.

This is a very nice photo but composition wise it is cropped too close. It looks like these two are jockeying for space within that frame. If you want a close crop maybe crop some more on the right to relieve the unbalance.

Regards,
Andre'

Superb composition! Great b&w, Manuel.

Manny I've been watching your photos.. I have to say I envy them.. you do an amazing portrait job..
well done and keep up sharing!

hello MANU.
good composition the portrait.
aldo.

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  • iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610)
  • [2006-08-22 12:00]

Hi Manny, this shot really grabs me because of the contrast, the simplicity, and the partly obscured faces. It has mystery, beauty, drama, all the elements of a great photo. The eyes are huge and have nice catchlights in them. I'm adding this shot to my favorites. :)

Thanks for sharing!

Erin

magnific...
V.

Hola Manuel.

Excelente doble retrato en BN, con unas miradas que se salen.

Saludos.

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