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hmm.. i felt the attention was turned towards the hair just below the clip and not her face. She is marvelous so i think should focus more on her face or just keep the whole photo blur with dreamy look.
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VEry soft and different with the focus on the clip and not her face. I have to say that I like it intentional or not. The compositionand POV are very good. JP
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Your photo composition is instructive. I wonder what she would look like in colour and sharp focusing but keeping to the same DOF and lighting.