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Copyright: Sabo Rustamova (sabina) (28)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2009-02-21
Categories: Mood
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2009-05-28 6:38
Viewed: 286
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
She is my friend and I am expressing all my feelings by her :)
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Hi,

I would rather say perplexed. I like this hand on the three .

i would crop out the right and the left hand sides to make this a vertical format (white areas, not important BG)
feel free to disagree
jc

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  • bri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 370 W: 0 N: 439] (2367)
  • [2009-05-28 8:55]

I would agree with JC pbut a lovely contrast in this B&W image. TFS Bri

Beautiful model. Her look to the camera and her pose are both excellent.

I don't think your composition of this shot works well for her though. She deserves a tighter framing so that the viewer is not distracted by other elements in the shot - especially that apartment building and the over-exposed tree to the left.

Rew

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